My heart grieves for Sesshomaru's loss. Though a good ending might do most people good, oddly enough, Sesshoumaru realizing his father's words a little too late and that he will never be able to hold Kagome won me over. And in the end, and I'm not lying, I cried[whether it was a product of a well-written piece or the fact I've been having a really rough time with my requirements, I will never know].
Thank you for writing this. :)
I realy enjoyed this story even if it was angsty. I liked how it was broken up with the days. It seemed like it flowed well even with the breaks.
I was really sad at the end though and felt like someone punched me in the gut. You did a great job writing the ending even if I was hoping for a happy ending.
Sometimes it's nice to read something that happy-go-lucky and is a little deeper.
jk (Chapter 1) - Tue 24 Jul 2012
oh comon giv d guy a break plz giv a happy ending
I'm not sure how I feel about this. It's... different. Not something that I normally keep company with but it's not bad so to speak. Very well written, and a good narative, it just doesn't sit right with me. Good job, but still. I'm unsure.
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