Oh boy, I can already imagine the confrontation! *Evil glint in my eyes.* I'm so looking forward to the next chapter, well done! :3 oh, and make sure you proof read everything! Small mistakes, like leavin out a word, can interrupt the flow of the reading. Other than one or two of those small things, this first chapter was amazing! Love it!!! XD
Sine48 (Chapter 1) - Sat 21 Jul 2012
Posting the first story is the hardest; but, it's fun. I like your summary and your beginning. Please continue!
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