Cute story
Loved it! Sometimes it was a little bit off, the details and the places..... but maybe it was because I'm too tired everytime I'm reading a fan-fiction. Sesskag fan-fictions are my good night stories!
Uh, Welp
Annoying how Sesshomoru isnt even trying urggh. I kinda felt like its a guy writing this story sometimes lol. But then there are unnecessary dramtic scenea that make me feel lke its a young woman writing this. Its a little cliche at some areas and a little like someone is writing their fantasy life right now but all in all I cannot stop reading. It's interesting
good story. i finished it in a day and a half. c'ya'
OMG!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! This was one of the BEST stories on here. IT WAS AMAZING!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Don't know if you noticed, but your last few chapters have turned into all italics midway through, and while the words are all there it's quite distracting and annoying. I hope you get the time and chance to fix this because it's a good story so far! :)
What happened to his I don't associate with humans attitude? Lol
I am confused as eff, i thought it was a fancy dinner party thing?
What a story! i loved it! And i love how you made the mothers react like true mothers...they were butchy of course but understandable...Kagome was so i n love however and i believe she proved a lot by sanding up to those "old hags" lol
Fantastic read, from beginning to end, this fic is addicting!
Great story. This is the second time I have read it and I is even better then the first. Thanks
the ending wasn't quite how i expected it. it was good anyways :) you could have done something better about it though, like you could have mentioned something about kagura finallly being free and her brother dying a horrible death along with everyone else who had something bad to do with the almost murders. something like that at least :D
I LOVE THIS STORY, IT NEVER FAILS TO MAKE ME CRY! iT ALWAYS GETS ME IN THE TICKER!
I absolutly love this stroy, It was AWESOME! Thanks for a great story.
DON'T EVER STOP WRITING LIKE THIS ! THIS WAS ONE OF MY FAVORITES, RIGHT UP THERE WITH" Hidden Abuse" most romantic!LOVE YOUR STYLE! GREAT READ, AND FABULOUS RIDE!
I liked the story. I just felt it was sort of rushed and out of wack. You didn't keep the drama steady and you made Kagome seem somewhat loose and weak willed. Then you made her into some bad ass woman who could kick anyone and their mama's butts. Very conflicting. Also Sesshoumaru was OOC at the beginning and then IC in the middle only to be OOC at the end again. And you rushed their 'love' in my opinion. It could, again in my opinion, use some work, but I still enjoyed reading it.
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