hm...i wonder who's the one that made sesshoumarus papers get lost...it seems that Sesshoumaru really has some people being angry with him, sabotating him....i just hope he wins custody over Kagome or i can only imagine for him to somehow abduct Kagome right away from the court room and escaping to god knows where...maybe a rebell camp on earth ( i forgot..is the earth habitable again?)....in this case i hope he does not forget to marry or mate Kagome right away before Inuyasha is back in the pricture X3......oh but what about Shippou and Souta...bah...i'm sure Sesshoumaru thought everything through before entering this court room..............
-sorry my imgagination is running wild with me....but it's been pretty long since a good chapter-story's been out there...i do like drabbles but you simple cannot "dream" ahead
thanx and keep up the great work
Keep it coming.
Keep it coming.
poor kagome...after everything she's been through it seems that inuyasha kinda became a real ass....still not considering her feelings and thoughts...also seems that he is not really against the new laws....seems to be more than happy that he finally has full control over kagome and the power to decide everything
...and where is sesshoumaru? and his papers?...poor kagome gets her heart broken right after discovering that sh might be in love with sesshoumaru......sigh...so much drama...
great job.....please update soon :3
Both chapters are great, keep it coming, Happy New Year!
It's been two month and two weeks since you last updated, I'm glad your back. Great chapter, keep it coming. Merry Christmas and a Happy New Year!
Alii (Chapter 9) - Sat 20 Oct 2012
Woohoo please update soon!
Keep it coming.
Loveyaa (Chapter 8) - Thu 18 Oct 2012
Hmm...lots of changes for both of them. But I can't help buy wonder with Kagome wangering around like that, what if she bumps into Inuyasha. Guess we'll find out what trouble she gets herself into soon enough. I can't wait to see what happens next and if they bring up the kiss :)
Keep it coming.
I really like it overall. You have some of the medical stuff wrong, like telescope instead of microscope, telescopes for stars, etc, microscopes for looking at things close up, like medical stuff, hair or what have you. You also seem to have word choice errors in spots, like “Warn if I need you?” when Sess leaves the room after Kagome wakes up doesn't make sense warn should be something else.
Deana (Chapter 7) - Tue 18 Sep 2012
This is an awesome story. I can't wait for you to update.
wonderful! I love these updates. I wonder what will happen with Shippo and Souta. lol Can't wait to find out more. Keep it coming.
Raluca (Chapter 7) - Wed 12 Sep 2012
I just finished reading all the chapters you’ve written so far. You’ve done a great job with this story!!
It’s really interesting. It’s different from a lot of AU stories that I’ve read until now. The plot is more real, more plausible and the small changes in the personality of the characters bring something new and intriguing to the table.
So I hope you’ll be updating really soon because I’m hooked!!
Keep it coming.
OUWWWWWWWWW omg the bitter pain of hitting a tap that doesnt have another chapter yet oh its a painful thing indeed lol wonderful story
Keep it coming.
Keep it coming.
Great story, keep it coming.
This is a really good beginning! I'm eagerly anticipating your updates! good work!
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