I liked it but he should have had to fight harder i can see such an extended story to this one i would have had her returning for her brothers gad or maybe sango wedding just i can see the passion that can be built in these pages more i love it though so inspiring 

This story was great and I enjoyed it, Merry Chridtmas and a Happy New Year!

can't wait for more ... i am glad this chapter wasnt the last  ( i dont really like sad endings... and this chapter was heartbreaking ) 

*Is she.. Going to run out of the room and silently decide to never see Seshomaru and his new bride ever again? :o 'Cause that'd be epic. (:

Is she.. Going to run out of the room and silently decide to nevershed Seshomaru and his new bride ever again? :o 'Cause that'd be epic. (:

awww so sweet, can't wait for more

This is a very hard story to read. 1st chapter and for most of it there's no way to tell who's speaking. There's talking and it's good it's broken by spaces, but don't know whose talking to who unless the chacters name is in it, but even then don't know who's speaking. Hard to tell how many people are around, what's happening around them, are they in a park, house. There's just not a lot of detail

Soooo depressing, but absolutely amazing!!!