What an absolutely fantastic and amazing piece of work! It drags the reader right inside the magic world and keeps you there! I get the feeling of those adventure classical works like the king Solomon's mines or Egyptian hunts for treasures! Everything is brilliant and tangled with the romance is even more fantastic! The heroes are real and tangible! And Pythia was amazing! That moment struck me to the core. Kagome's pain became mine at his harsh words! I feel for her! The mystery youbwove is breathtaking and I can't wait to entangle it and find out the truth! You certainly have a talent with words! Your style is absolutely fabulous! I honestly am in love with this fic! And your writing style! I read a lot, there are many good fics here, but yours feels like a book, a good fiction novel! I would honestly buy a book with this plot and story! That being said, I understand everyone has a life but I really hope you will find time and inspiration to update soon! I would greatly appreciate it! My compliments! Good luck! Thx again for sharing this with us!
Sailor Moon new anime is starting on July 5. Nice chapter, keep it coming.
What Makes A Dad
God took the strength of a mountain, The majesty of a tree, The warmth of a summer run, The calm of a quiet sea, The generous soul of nature, The comforting arm of night, The wisdom of the ages, The power of the eagle's flight, The joy of a morning in spring, The faith of a mustard seed, The patience of eternity, The depth of a family need, Then God combined these qualities, When there was nothing more to add, He knew His masterpiece was complete, And so, He called it...Dad.
Happy Father's Day!
Eryn (Chapter 8) - Sat 14 Jun 2014
GAH!!! I have waited so long for a new chapeter, and I am sooo happy this is up again, but that was a killer Cliff hanger! Hope for more soon, and thank you!!
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I read it again and you killed me again with the cliffty.
*sniff sniff
I don't like begin killed by cliffty.Update soon please so the I may come back to life and love you for writing this.
Your knack for story telling is wonderful. This will be one of my favorite fictions. Keep up the great work.
Akita (Chapter 8) - Sat 18 Jan 2014
I like it, I like it
Late but great cool, keep it coming. Happy New Year!
*screams* HOW CAN YOU END IT LIKE THAT??? DRAMAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAA!!
Im going to pull my hair out one of these days.(Cliffhangers) -_-
Awesome, keep it coming.
Haven (Chapter 7) - Sat 09 Nov 2013
Ooh and the plot thickens. I like the overlay of different mythologies -- it's interesting and Apollo and Artemis are two of my faves. Wonder if there will be other gods making guest appearances? Watch out Kags: Artemis' arrow coming to get you! Thanks for writing, I can't wait to read more.
Akita (Chapter 7) - Sat 09 Nov 2013
OOOO youre killing me with the cliffies! And what did Apollo do?! I need backstories!!!
Yay!! Another chapter!
Wonderful idea for a fanfic, wherever didja get it?
Anonymous (Chapter 1) - Sun 03 Nov 2013
I like the story so far, please update :)
Great chapter, please don't take long to update the next chapter. Keep it coming.
Lumi (Chapter 6) - Sat 02 Nov 2013
Great update! I'm loving your portrayal of all the characters, and really enjoyed Kagome's interactions with Apollo. I can't wait to see what happens next!
Loveyaa (Chapter 5) - Sat 21 Sep 2013
Quite an interesting story with so many gods and so many strings tieing them all together. Great job of writing out all the possibilities, but still keeping a smooth flow. I can't wait to see who outwits who and how many alliances are built and rebuilt. I can't wait to see what happens next :)
I'm wowwed. I don't think there's another word for how I feel. I mean, there probably is, but I really can't think of it!! I really don't think I've seen such an original plot in such a long time that I just want to keep reading, even though I have papers to write before Sunday night!! I've had trouble lately with writing because I have so much going on in my life and it keeps spilling over into my fics I think. I'm trying to stop that because my fics aren't at all a reflection of my life. You make me remember what it is to write with passion and excitment, something I haven't felt in a long time! So thanks and always keep up the good word! -Fei
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