I think it was very cute. I think the ending was a little rushed, but that may be because of how short it is. It's an adorable story. I would have loved to read more. Good job!

I would read your fic if you hadn't made her the retard that everyone from fanfictions love to make her as. Point to me in the manga or anime where she speaks that way or even calls Kagome 'pretty lady' and I'd take my words back. Plus I'm tired of wasting my time reading drabbles, everyone is always copying each other; hardly anyone's original anymore.

4 out of 5 chaps include pretty lady in the chapter name. It matches how Rin's personality is in this fic. I like it. :)

I wonder, what's next?

Love the idea. Something about Rin and Sesshomaru's relationship is just so charming in a surprising way. And here's when I take my hat off to you for utilizing Rin and Sesshomaru's odd but beautiful protector-ward relationship. Keep it up! :)

I would like to know what the back story is! :) Great story so far!

How how DARE YOU  its cute and short and I go down to push the button and its not there! Put up another so I can push the button again! :) really lovable its going in lmy alerts

The title is certainly eye-catching. I think this will be a fun read.