I really have no other words for this other than wow. I like that it's just all feeling and you certainly feel it as you read it. 

he wants to hate her, but he can't. she is the positive to his negative. she brings light to his dark

and he is help/hopeless without her. that is what i got from reading this. oh, and he LOVES making

love to her. keep up the great writing. c'ya'

0_o oh my!  *melts to goo*

Someone was feeling... angsty?  Repressed? Frustrated?  Or just really creative?  That was beautiful.

WOW! Simply WOW! Intense, vivid, erotic, tortured and so beautiful in its own way. You never cease to amaze me as a writer.

Hi ^_^

You're awesome.

Very well written, love your use of description. I could feel that need he was talking about, it was great.

Thanks!

Wow!  That is deep!  Very well done.  I really like it.  More please :)

The story was great.