Hello,

thank you thank you THANK YOU for sharing this one shot! It was HILARIOUS and made my day!!!! I was laughing all the time like mad ... gosh was that great!

I love everything about it! The characterization, the plot, the jokes, the drama - just everything! And I totally liked, that you switched perspectives throughout the story! I found Inuyasha's involvment a perfect idea!!!! - don't worry about that!

And I'm totally sure I wanted to tell you more in this review, though I'm still laughing like mad, and can't concentrate right now...sorry!

I dont have anything else to say to you but GREAT< OWESOME<EXELENT WORK!!! I was cracking up the whole time, my husband looked at me like "WTH you crazy woman??"  lol... i just love it so much!!!! just great job, you are an amazing writter!

I loved it! Good job on an often over-used and poorly-written theme. 

Too cute with sexy undertones... but now I want doughnuts!

i liked it! the sight of little kagome arresting someone like sesshomaru is hilarious!!

Hah that was nice.

LOL! Amazing love story! I enjoyed it!

funny funny! deserves a lemony limey sequel haha! :)

Oh My this definately deserves a sequel ;p

Cuuuututteeee/!!! love it! 

That was hilarious! I loved it! Inuyasha's involvment was actually really funny, and it was great, so don't worry. In my mind, Kagome totally looked like Officer Jenny from Pokemon. :p

This was hilarious!  Love the ending!  ^.^

*giggles* That's an interesting way to look at BSDM.  I likie!