This is a great story. I had to look up the name of the pup.

I am confused about a few parts of this story. We never learned how her mother and grandfather suddenly passed away, it was as if she didn't even question why they were suddenly gone and between Miroku's wind tunnel possibly killing him and Kohaku surviving as a slave to Naraku, it seems odd that Sango and Miroku would suddenly and easily back out of the fight just because they had sex or because of a dream that Kagome said she had. If Kagome had been known to already have dreams that proved factual previously I could see it having a strong impact in their decision but she merely had a brief conversation with Sango, not both Sango and Miroku, but then Sango was suddenly saying good bye. For someone who wanted to save her brother and get justice for her entire family and village she gave up years of searching and fighting for them quite suddenly. 

So ............... Are we going to pretend that he doesn't have a life sword

Le gasp! You were really going to kill him off? Of course we would be mad????. What would be the point of just killing him? You've already done this weird thing by turning Kagomes eyes green. Not to say its bad, its just seems a little forced. Why would her eye turn green after taking the blood of a gold eye inu? Wouldn't she take the traits of an inu? Or even maybe th jewels color? Idk it feels like its missing something. Maybe if it were blue green cause her eyes were turning gold would have been better? Whatever I love the story I just wanted to get my thoughts out. Of course this doesn't mean I want to force my opinion on you. Opinions are not facts. Ok? GREAT! onward to the other chapters where Inu might be dead! ????

If inuyasha wasnt there Sesshomaru would of died instead....hasn't Kagome clued in on that yet too????

awwwwww "i love you too" "damn woman" i adore it!!

ugh Inuyasha I sm so not surprised by your behavior but yay for being told off!!

squeeee the progress of their romance is so natural it's awesome!!

why the hell are you staying with the group Kagpme!! He only insults you!! *flips table*

Ugh Inuyasha you dumb butt....Kagome you really need to have him stop calling you a wench!

Wonderful story! Interesting epilouge, i really enjoyed reading this!

Wow.  This story has so many layers to it.  I find that once one story arch was unfolded another one unravelled.   It blew my mind.    I was upset when I finished it.   It was amazing!

Enjoyed the story. 

Haven't finished reading the tale but so far, I am really liking it. I love that you're building their attraction and affection slowly and organically (even if I am frustrated to see them get it on). I admit that I have found your spelling and grammatical mistakes a bit distracting, but your story has been engrossing enough that I have been able to get over it.

Please don't hold this against me; I am a recovering grammar nazi, who is honestly trying to not be so anal. Anyway, thanks for sharing your creativity and don't stop writing. Cheers.

This story is amazing! I enjoyed every second of it. Your portrayal of Kagome was almost perfect and you kept Sesshoumaru's personal transformation subtle. After digging through stories of a ranting self righteous Kagome or a rapist Sesshoumaru this story was refreshing. Though i will say i wasnt fond of inuyasha's portrayal. He was a little over board. But! I know it was necessary for the story. And rather than being left wanting more, i find i am completely satisfied with the ending.

It was the best story I ever read in my life and I rarely give review. So keep up the great work.

Yay, i love rereading this story :)

what a interesting story you made it was great i am also making my 1st story i hope it will be as good as yours

This story was great.It kept you interested as you never knew what would happen next. I found this yesterday,started reading & was so absorbed that I was unable to stop until it was done. This story brought up so many ideas that were mentioned throughout it,you could easily turn around & write many more stories just from ideas mentioned. I'm curious about so many things that I just have to ask. I hope you(the writer)aren't offended as it isn't my intent to offend you in anyway.I just have a crazed curiosity & can't keep myself from wondering about certain things so I really hope asking these questions doesn't upset you. I've already read a few of your stories on this site & will be reading the rest you have on this site.I love your writing & look forward to reading more of your work. What happened to Kagome's Mom after they took her?Was she taken to live with them for the rest of her days?Also, it mentioned that Kagome had a different Dad than Souta but, you never mentioned who her real Dad was or if he was human.Since Kagome was able to become youkai I can't help wondering if it had to do with her real father? Also, if Kagome was Sessh's 'soul mate' as it was mentioned early in the story then, could her real father have been a youkai, some other being or from the past? If youkai's are immortal(or close to) beings ,could an immortal soul being a soul mate of a mortal soul?It was mentioned at one point that Kagome was the only Miko Youkai,I still don't understand how or why she was able to become a youkai but,could it have had something to do with her real dad?I thought about how Kagome was given a gift by Sessh & he told her it had nothing to do with courting(a necklace) gift but,it was like a b-day gift,more of a youkai tradition to get a coming of age gift & this was many years before Kagome told Sessh & her son when her real birthday was & at the time they thought she was becoming 18.Also what happened to Kaede after Kagome took that tea that destroyed her womb?I couldn't recall if she was mentioned after that or if she was the mid-wife that helped Kagome give birth in the last chapter? & when the ancient said she'd heal Kagome's womb in exchange to be the soul for their pup, so for 1st time she could walk,talk,live & interact with the world around her but, I was unsure if she meant that she was healing her womb only so she could be born into a body or if was she healing Kagome's womb permanently so that Kagome & Sessh could continue to have pups? Did Souta ever  find a mate or a wife? I'd hate to think he lived a life alone.I was worried that he resented the fact that he ended up living in the past or such a long life. I also wondered how it was that Sessh knew Kagome had a strong power within her as he seemed to have known it for a long time ? I also wondered what happened to Sessh cousin Yui & if Kagome & Sessh ever used the gift of speaking to each other with thought as it was only brought up the one time when Kagome met Yui? I hope you write another story like this one & even if you don't I look forward to anything else you write.

I've been wondering if we are ever going to find out the truth of what happened to Souta & Kagomes family? It seemed odd that when Souta finally came to the past with Kags,he wanted nothing to do with Inu & wouldn't even look at him.It made me wonder if when Kagome was kidnapped by Naraku that 1st time & Inu dissappeared for over 6 days & wouldn't tell Sango or Miroku where he was,that he might've gone thru the well & killed Kagome's family & Souta either knew or suspected that it was Inu who'd killed his family. I don't know why Kagome never thought about it after how bad she'd been treated by him. I also don't understand how Inu's fang that is the 'Sword of Protection' still transforms. As he's broken his vow to protect Kagome & she was the one who pulled it,gave it to him to yeild & yet,it still wouldn't transform till he vowed to protect her. I understand that as the sword was made from his dads powerful fang that it would still have the ability to keep his demon blood from taking over but other than him having to where it to keep from turning into a crazed full demon since he broke his vow to protect it only seems right that the sword shouldn't transform for him anymore.