Very romantic.  He is certainly enthralled with her.  Lucky girl.  Nice job, I enjoyed reading it very much. 
      
lyidia (Chapter 1) - Sat 24 May 2008 
| I seriously think that you should turn this into a story, or even a series of one shots.  It has a great plot and diolouge, and the characters are so viberant
       
   
   
 
 
 
										 
									
									
																										
								
								
								
																								
															
													
					
				
								
				
				
			
				
				
		
				
	
			
			
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