Just finished reading the whole story again. I love your characters, there is so much feeling and depth with all of them. The story line is excellent and nicely detailed. I look forward to finding out what deal they can come to and seeing how they can start seeing each other in a better light. Can't wait for the next chapter!
I hope Jaken at leasts finds her someone that she can befriend.
Great update!! This is soooo good!!! I love it already! I can't wait to read more!
Happy new year!!!
Shaneka (Chapter 7) - Wed 03 Jan 2018
Love this story, can't wait for the next update.
DivaG (Chapter 7) - Wed 03 Jan 2018
It’s interesting that Sesshoumaru thinks of himself as a honored being when he has no honor at all. He is cruel, pridefull, full of himself, spoiled but never Honored. It shows that demons are extinct in the future for a good reason. Poor Kagome, I hope that shows some strenght in the future to show that she has some worth.
Happy holidays!! Sesshomaru still comes off to douchy for my taste but your writing style Is what keeps me coming back. Can't wait for you next chapter
Jaken is too much. I wished Kagome had fried him.
Natalia (Chapter 7) - Tue 02 Jan 2018
Hm good advice about trigger warming... I honestly don't know if I will read if rape would be included... Its a tender theme and I usually skip it. Please add a warning so we can know and decide. I mean when it will really happen but I hope it won't since the tone of the fic hints more toward Sesshomaru being disgusted than rape her. Maybe only if bakuseno would mess with some spell or something!
Thx for updating!
Still think Sesshomaru is too cruel and full of himself lol!
Happy holidays!
Aj (Chapter 6) - Fri 29 Dec 2017
Maaaan, still no update? Common, this fic is just to good to abandon.
Didi (Chapter 6) - Wed 27 Dec 2017
I'm so glad you are back!
Uhhh (Chapter 4) - Wed 27 Dec 2017
I just thought I would mention that it would be a good idea for you to leave a more prominent trigger warning for rape / concepts of rape in the summary. I sincerely apologize if this comes off as rude, but as a CSA survivor happening upon the graphic descriptions of Sesshomaru and Inuyasha's unwilling desire to rape Kagome was so upsetting that it made me nauseous. And I really would have appreciated a warning so that I would have known not to read.
blommie8 (Chapter 6) - Sun 24 Dec 2017
This is really good!! I can't wait to read more!!
Happy holidays by the way!
Interesting I'm curious as to where you'll go from here and how their relationship will develop, sesshomaru seems very um high strung can't wait for your next chapter
Ana (Chapter 2) - Tue 19 Dec 2017
Hey Rinku. I'm so glad to see you writing again :D
I decided to re-read this fic again (because it has been such a long time and you've decided to improve) and I love it. The story is very captivating and I hope you don't leave us hanging again.
Also, though I should tell you that I've noticed a small error. In this sentence: "No one would find out about this dishonor and if they did, they would not live to tell of it.", "dishonor" should be "dishonour" and "tell of it" should be "tell about it".
I'm still in chap 2 so I'll keep on reading :)
Thank you again
I'm so glad you are back! This is a great story and the pacing feels really good in this last chapter! Please keep going!!
Natalia (Chapter 6) - Mon 18 Dec 2017
I missed your writing. Your fics were always unique. I understand you are busy and everyone has a life so I thank you for updating!
About the chapter and change... Well I definitely don't like your sesshoumaru. Too cruel and abusive in my opinion. And how he struck bakuseno... No honour in that. To attack an ally of the West, one of his father's advisers... Shame on him.
If you are basing your sesshoumaru after the end of manga I see no character growth. And he is definitely not a noble lord I see him as
But that is strictly my opinion.
I loved the dialogue and kagome and her behaviour.
The very much for updating, will eagerly wait fir more!
I can’t wait to read more!!! I’m so glad you’re back!!!!!
Took a very long time to get to where we are. It's a good story though keep gping
It's a really interesting story, I especially like that neither Kagome nor Sesshomaru are perfect as characters.
Kagome is immature and makes a lot of mistakes like following Inuyasha blindly to the point of idiocy and detrimental to her health and future, not to mention her short temper is like a gun constantly ponting at her own foot. Meanwhile, Sesshomaru is so arrogant and self-assured he can't see anyone except himself, the only thing that saved both their lives at the last clash was Tenseiga and he won't even acknowledge it, he only used it out of instinct and trained skill alone, furthermore he attacked Bokuseno and his forest, he has no problem turning on his own allies for petty reasons and that is dangerous for him.
But those very same flaws make me want to read more! How can there ever be a functioning romantic relationship if there is not even a shred of respect between those two? The potential for their growth as characters is there, and the time limit of the 'season' makes it all the more interesting.
I loved everything, the only tiny bit that I found a little exasperating was how his beauty is constantly being pointed out, like every sentence in which he appears. Other than that I really liked this story, I hope you can continue your work.
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