Poor Kagome, she just can't get a break! All sort of situations always befall on her part.
I feel sad for her. Sesshomaru’s cruelty and sneering face would discourage and hurt her a lot. I can't decide about Sesshomaru’s positive traits, cause at the moment I see none. I get it that he is enraged that she is his mate. Human hating including and all those, he is not even a good ruler at the moment. Kagome even though is human is still a guest and he had to reprimand his general. AT least I hope he will at least say something. I don't know what you have in mind, but I don't see the Canon Sesshomaru as such cruel being. But that is only my opinion and I respect yours as well. I aplaud you for going the long road for love, but a balance is also needed otherwise it's just a victim of abuse which can be mental as well as physical is loving the person who hurt her. The Stockholm syndrome is too often used in fanfiction. I am not saying you do that, just saying that many authors go that road without really understanding the cruel reality of abuse. I love your writing style and your ideas are unique but I cannnon say I am a fan of your Sesshomaru at the moment. No offence to you! Your writing is amazing to make a reader so worked up! I know you are right and more water and nurturing is needed but somehow I don't believe he will change drastically. Kagome is very forgiving so he is lucky!
Sadoka's pov was very detailed and good. I kept thinking what a bore/jerk is jaken.
I wish you all the best, thank you for updating. Your writing really improved and the description is more fluid.
Take care!
Wow Sesshomaru‘s not fooling me! He wants her! I can’t wait to read more!!!
guest111 (Chapter 8) - Thu 18 Jan 2018
wow, that what a wonderful chapter.
nicole (Chapter 8) - Thu 18 Jan 2018
AWww poor kagome I feel bad for her #perverts....let her give sesshoumaru a run for the kingdom
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