Great chapter, I hope Kagome get together with Sesshomaru and kick Inuyasha to the curb, please update soon. Happy Mothers Day!

That was ... wonderful, great, and sad.  And a lot of cvhapters updated I love this fic. can't wait for the next one and hopefully she leaves inuyasah soon. aw... about how tender Sesshoumaru was with her in the woods.

nice dream scene chapter

Wow...you are really off to a great start...keep writing...

HOT DAMN! By far the best chapter so far!! Intense and surprising as well! I saw what you did there! Tricked even us into thinking she was thinking about Inuyasha! My best line so far has to be "He had bested himself." lol I'm going to apologize about the incoherence of this review, but I'm just so giddy and smilely from reading that last chapter I can't form coherent sentences except for this one. I LOVE THIS STORY!

Anyways, now that you know all that. I couldn't find any spelling or grammar mistakes, but I'm not sure if there were none or everytime I read it I got to caught up in the story to actually look for them lol. Lets go with the first one. And I'm soooo sorry for making you change your story around not once but twice! When will we ever meet inu yasha?! But i'm kinda of glad I did say something otherwise I wouldn't have been able to read this last chapter because it would have never (maybe) existed. 

I like your story it's interesting.  I look forward to reading more.

Sooo good!

Ahh sorry about the double review, but I knew I was forgeting something but I didn't recongize it on the second read through, and I finally remembered what it was...

"Sango felt a sudden flood of affection or Miroku", lol you missed an f. That is all.

What's this? Another chapter? Well here's another review then. I was a little confused when they put Sesshoumaru onto Kirara. Is he sitting up or laying down somehow. I assumed sitting up but I wasn't to sure just because I knew that laying down Sesshoumaru onto Kirara would be very unSesshoumaru-y (lol).

Also, on that same note, they keep going to find Inuyasha, but Sesshoumaru is severely weakened. Would Sesshoumaru want to be around the powerful demon when he's already so weakened, or his he not weakened enough for the demon to actually be a threat to his person? (I don't know if that makes sense.)

"When he looked up, saw Inuyasha lying on the floor..." I'm not sure if you wanted this to be a fragment or not as a segue into the next chapter, other wise you could insert he between "Up, saw" or delete "when he" and change "looked up" to "looking up" while keeping the he in as well.

1. When he looked up, he saw...

2. Looking up, he saw...

O.o I love the ending! Kagome's not weak but instead strong and healthy. yay! Also, I learned a new word today! double yay! I was going to correct your miaowing and say it's supposed to be meowing, but miaow is definietly a word (according to online dictionaries lol). So good to know. Also appreciate how you are working to the characters incharacter. But I did notice but one minor mistake:

"Miroku said reassuringly to Shipou"

And that's it. Also, I noticed much improvement with the commas. If you followed my previous advice, or not, Great Job!

Love the chapters!

Sooo good

Hey-yo!

Great chapter, definetly got Kagome's feelings of nonchalance-ness when dealing with the almighty demon lord lol but I noticed that one of the other reviewers said there were a couple grammar mistakes. I found, I guess comparatively, only major one:

looked up to find find Sesshoumaru’s golden eyes on her

*repeat word

Other than that I just noticed that the commas were a bit off or were missing for some areas. I'm not really to good with telling people were commas should go because I'm not to great with them myself. But I always find it useful to read what you have done so far out loud and where ever you take a natural pause that should either be a comma or a period. But then again I know people that either don't pause when reading or pause too much. So use that peice of advice to your own discrestion. 

Good start! It's great that you're handling Kagome and Inuyasha falling out of love in a different way. They also seem to be staying true to character. There are a few grammatical, spelling, and punctuation errors, but for the most part, those are usually very easily overlooked if you can keep the story interesting!  Keep up the great work, I would love to see more!

Great story, please update soon.

I like it. I feel bad for them, but it looks liek it's not meant to be. Can't wait for the next chapter and what happens when kagome finds out. and lol to sessh. being annoyed about being called oni-san. :)

Well Inuyasha is screwed now lol

Great start so far. Just don't forget to put a description in! lol

I really liked the flow and detail. But there are just a few (minor) suggestions (you don't have to listen to them)...

"With the jewel gone, and everyone became busy with the task of recovering from the aftermath of the battle"

I think you should remove "and" becuase it doesn't make sense.

"In another 4 months time, there would be a celebration across the lands."

If a number is less than (I believe) 100 then it should be typed out. I know you typed out the others but this one caught my eye while reading it.

"Look AKEMi"

I think you missed the i. That's it lol

Also, maybe you could explain a little about why Kirara stayed with Kagome and Inuyasha instead of going with Sango.

"They stopped laughing when Sesshouaru shot them the ame look. "

I believe you meant "same". 

"Oni-san, what brings you over to see us?"

I believe you meant "Onii"

I also don't really get/understand this exchange of sentences:

"Oni-san, what brings you over to see us?"

Sesshoumaru shot her a dirty look. 

"You will desist from referring to this Sesshoumaru in that way." 

"Why?" Kagome asked,still smiling, completely unaware.

Shippou choked on his fish from laughter and started to cough

*At first I thought that he gave her the dirty look because he's inuyasha's half brother, not full brother. But then she asks why still being completely unaware, when she knows the tension between the brother/halfbrother issue. Also, why did shippou and rin find it so funny?

and last but not least:

I think you should save the last sentence for the next chapter, if you are able. Because before that it is a great ending and good for transition and leaves you wondering just a bit about what they are going to find. but with the last sentence tacked on it seemes like you just gave away the punch line of you joke before you even finished telling it (figuratively). 

Anyways, if you actually made it down to the bottom of the god-forsakenly long review then I congradulate you. And I look forward to reading the following chapters.