I like this, it's very original and I think you kept everyone very much in character. <3
nope you need to write more! Sesshomaru has to feel bad for what he's done to her, and Kouga needs to get his part in it too, as he's the one that ultimately got kagome into this. I'd rather love it, if kagome ended up preggo, dropped out, and sess actually ends up with feelings realizing that he's pretty much EFed her life all b/c he's a jerk. I could go on but it would be a rather drama happy plunnie that might or might not end up happy. If you'd want to hear what i'd do from here, please let me know I'd be glad to share! this was a good oneshot though, very angsty though.
Damn, this story was good.
I spotted some errors, but they were minor. :D I hope you continue this story, instead of ending it like this. Hehe.
I've never read a story like this and that's sayingsomething b/c I've read a lot of fanfiction. Please continue.
OHHH - how evil of Sesshoumaru! That jerk! O= I think maybe a sequel is in order? Maybe? Yes? Yes? xP I want to know what happens next!
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