Love his desperation for Kagome. I wonder what is keeping him from Kagome? That's the big question. :D This story is amazingly hot.
Wow! Just wow!
That was so raw, so delicious - it left ME panting lol. I haven't read a fanfiction like this in a while - so full of intimacy but still dark and mysterious. I loved everything about it; his carefully thought of method of using these woman to sate his hungry to how his obsession brings light to something more, perhaps, than sexual desire.
I see a great story ahead for this fanfiction and to be honest, I sense the lemons and smut will only get better and better >D!
Keep up the great work and I hope to see more chapters soon :D
P.S. I have to admit, I loved the small dialogue you added; I'm a sucker for 'ditry' talk and hope to see more ;)
Once again HOT!!! But I'm really curious as to why Kagome is the forbidden one but I'm sure you'll have that revealed in the next chapter :)
Hot!!! I loved the male perspective :)
Pricila (Chapter 2) - Fri 20 Apr 2012
Ooo, so there families are friends; so she must know him. Wow, I can't wait to find out why she's taboo. . . Isn't maybe because there families are friends?? But wouldtth the family like that? Maybe she's already spoken for? Okay, I'll stop guessing. Continue!
I say continue! I LOVED IT :D!!
It was hot, dark and SO lemony; I've been reading it over and over again and I would LOVE to see another chapter! :)
You definitely should continue this. With how deliciously raw it's written and how intriguing the premise is, I can see this turning into a great smut-fic. And since I'm me, I'm hoping the reasoning behind not being able to have her borders as close to taboo as possible ;).
Great job.
Pricila (Chapter 1) - Thu 19 Apr 2012
Continue! That was a good for your first smut! Now, I want to know why she's forbidden?
lindsay (Chapter 1) - Wed 18 Apr 2012
Woooh I think I need a cold shower! :P I vote continue, you wrote this beautifully. Keep up the good, steamy, work :)
Laura (Chapter 1) - Wed 18 Apr 2012
Please continue!!!!!!!! This was great!
Kayelyn (Chapter 1) - Wed 18 Apr 2012
wow....*fans herself off*
I really hope that you continue this. I want to know why she is so forbidden, and if the obsession is reciprocrated.
This was really well written and flowed perfectly.
Great Job!
Wow! That was actually pretty hot! Sounds like he has some pretty wicked fantasies about her.
I vote continued. Creep/stalker Sesshou is titillating by itself, but that he chooses this option as he is forbidden to have her has me hanging of the edge of my seat. It must be something huge for I-Get-What-I-Want, I-Do-What-I-Want Sesshoumaru to obey this edict. I mean the man has fantasies about her to last a lifetime. I hope to see more soon.
--KD
sarhea (Chapter 1) - Wed 18 Apr 2012
Love to see this one continued. There are so many possibilities, directions you can take it. Exactly why she is forbidden: Family friend's daughter, Underaged, Step-sister, Father's ward... And better yet does she know, or suspect? And in both cases would she welcome his attention... or be persuaded.... And if she does, is she encouraging it?
So many possibilities. Look forward to see this one continued.
--Cheers!
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