Not your typical Sess/Kag story, since it was focusing more on Dela Mirona, but it was still cute and well written. I was confused at about what was supposed to be going on, but it all became clear with the "You despicable pervert!" line. :) I'll have to check out the rest of Sayonora, My Sango.
Wow! Wasn't expecting that! At first i was confused because i didnt know what was going on or who dela mirona was. But after the end i was grinning. It was really well written despite a few awkard sentences here and there! I felt sesshoumaru was sorta mean to kagome in his thinking (about how she dragged him to these different occasions...etc) idk. but overall i liked it!
ducky out!
Well written and funny. I like the descriptives and the creative names you chose for Sango and Miroku.
Hairann (Chapter 1) - Sun 07 Feb 2010
Nicely done. The discriptions were very well written and easy to imagine. The story flowed rather nicely and there was nothing to interupt it. Keep up the good work.
I think this is well written, and I am sure the other parts are as well. I will have to look up the other part on FF.net so that I can understand more of what is going on. Keep up the good work!
European nobles in the time of finery and pompousness...Miroku is still a pervert after all these years. Trust Kagome to find the reincarnated souls of her Feudal friends and match them back together. And Sango is still the fierce warrior she always was. I loved the descriptions of their clothing - not a lot of stories touch on that time period.
Very fun!!
Ikaru (Chapter 1) - Fri 05 Feb 2010
i must say you spin a very amusing tale, i loved the setting and the way you told the story, and i must say it was a very Mirokoish thing to say there at the end, my sides are still hurting from laughing so hard.. very well done!!!
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