Please continue I want to know what happens next.
Hello, I realize it has been a while since you have updated this story. But I was was going through my favourite list and reread this one. I love it!
I hope your health is taking a turn for the better and you continue writing, either here or elsewhere. You truly are a gifted writer. Take care. :)
trisha allen (Chapter 2) - Sun 09 Jun 2013
hope to read more soon
(Chapter 1) - Sun 23 Dec 2012
This story, nor my others, have been forgotten, I promise...it's not a waste. My health and trying to get back on my feet has gotten in the way. I appreciate the patience from you all. :)
I remember this, I read it a while back... seems like it didn't get anywhere yet. What a waste... then agian it might not have been so long ago, if that's the case then ignore this... I've been getting worse at keeping things straight recently.
This is such an adorable and funny story. :) I look forward to your next chapter.
SS
(Chapter 1) - Sat 05 May 2012
Again, THANK YOU GUYS ALL SO MUCH FOR THE READS & AWESOME REVIEWS!!! I'm HALFWAY through part 3, but I've encountered a slight hiccup...more like a fork in the road and I'm trying to decide which path will be the best choice. Damn plot bunnies! LOL! But seriously, I am so happy otherwise! Love you guys tons!!
I really like your fic. ;-; Hope Kagome somehow gets out. Can't wait for the next installment.
Nyx (Chapter 2) - Thu 03 May 2012
Love it! Especially Inuyasha's reaction in the previous chapter.
PS: You marked this story as completed by mistake. Unless it's over. (Not likely because of the cliffy.) That would make us (readers) sad.
Ooooh I can't wait to see what happens next! I wanna know if she kicks the bucket or lives lol update soon when you can! ^.^
Good story. Can't wait to see where it goes. Love the banter. :)
Cass (Chapter 2) - Wed 02 May 2012
I love their banter! you're doing great!
Hilarious series and I loved the banter between Sesshoumaru and Kagome in the first chapter, very entertaining :)
Aw nuts! Talk about a cliff hanger! I like this story.
TKE (Chapter 2) - Wed 02 May 2012
awesome!!! I love the suspense!!
Im enjoying this so far and glad I clicked on the recommended link for it. Somehow you managed to make the whole lake/drowning scene with Kagome relaxing and peaceful rather than angsty which I think was a unique choice. Also, good job with handling the emotions in the beginning. I'm glad you haven't made everything so easy and simple for the couple. But anyway, update soon. :)
-E.C.
I am glad this was recommended on the forum (I don't normally stop to read fanfics unless someone really says 'hey, go read this' and makes a fuss, lol- I'm not a snob or an elitist by any means, I just usually don't read because when I do I tend to get caught up and then I forget all about working on my own stories). I do think maybe you could use a beta-reader, it's enjoyable and an easy read, but I feel as if some of the smaller points (correct placement of commas and such) could do with a little tidying up. It didn't trip up my reading, but I can be a nit-picker about such things.
I do think you did a fantastic job of portraying that very unique, and occassionally difficult to explain, feel of reluctantly being in love and it would be terrible if you didn't continue. I hope to see Sesshomaru respond to her call and come to the rescue, but I await your next chapter, no matter what the next step is.
Pebbles (Chapter 2) - Wed 02 May 2012
Honestly, I was expecting some sort of humorous continuation from the first. However, this works too. And it was written like how experiencing something like that would happen: quick and without warning. If that's what you were going for, you succeeded. The trepidation in Inuyasha's inner thought is sooo characteristic to a panic attack. Of all people to call upon, I would assume it'd be Sessh when in a panic.
I wonder how she will be saved....
Thank you for continuing! ^-^
Part two was amzingly written, you really put alot of feeling and emotion into it. I enjoy how you can go from humor and sarcasm to emotional dama. now I REALLY am dying for the next part! I hope you end up getting recognized for your writing one day...and fanart too. I'd draw something for you, but stick people is the best i can do lol. ;)
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