Okay, I'm going to put this as gently as I can. If you don't get your butt to work and post the next chapter, I will come through your computer, duct tape you to your chair, and force you to write. This is absolutely fantastic. I feel as though I have never in my life read a Sesshoumaru/Kagome office story, after discovering this little piece of gold. I jumped right into 'like' when Kagome told him off and left, and then he went and got her information out of the trash to contact her. Then, I forcefully dived in LOVE when I got to the part about her people pleasing ways and how those ways affected her responses to Sesshoumaru. Heh heh, goodbye perfume, hello hanging hair. I was a little evil for enjoying their back and forth dealing with the work trying to do her best to please him, but I felt it was okay, since you wrote it to be enjoyed.
Haha, the little spout with Kagura. That was definitely interesting along with the well played reveal of what exactly they were fighting over in their divorce. Man, just walking in like she owned the place, dragging him by his tie and doing such scandalous things to him, insinuating/asking if Kagome was his mistress and talking about her attire and looks. *smh* Bad Kagura. Oh but Sesshoumaru didn’t take it laying down, whoo, “drop dead Kagura,” mmn, you just felt the cold, uncaring demeanor laying on top of his very subtle anger while listening to her. Oh and the part where he grabbed her and the resulting bleeding, great stuff. Now, I was surprised by Sesshoumaru's post-event reaction, but hey, at least Kagome got off of work.
That snotty landlady should be chopped in the throat, trying to kick her out for a two month in a row setback. The girl is still paying. It's not like she's two months behind. *shrug* eh, I don't mind though, it gets her to live with Sesshoumaru. OHHH, the part about her shoes and hair, lol, either Sesshoumaru only likes aesthetically pleasing things around him, or he wants to peruse the form of his sexy secretary…. well when he gets her to that point. Oh, I swooned. It was interesting to see him ask her what was wrong and offer her a solution. I do wonder however if he was just taking a chance to further torture her with piles of work or just so he could see her all the time, and possibly half dressed...like just a shirt and draws half dressed....*shrug* maybe he wants to do both.
Lol, you can see where my bad mind is guessing and throwing reasons in interpretation of what I'm reading because I can't help myself. Now, I feel the need to repeat myself after my gushing of my newfound love for this story, so you will understand how serious I am. *fierce glare and evil voice* Update Immediately! or I will withhold cookies or tie you to a chair with no ability to pee or eat, until you comply with my wishes. *big smiles* I'll be waiting, dear authoress. Happy Writing. :)
--KD
HÆĐĒS (Chapter 2) - Thu 05 Apr 2012
OH My GAWD~ I love it~. I really like how you made everyone have flaws, it kinda makes the characters more real. When you made kagome have flats and perfume, other stories often say "oh how pretty she is" or "How sesshomaru liked her scent" but intead you made him hate it about her lol. I guess i really like it when kagome seems a little more plain but pretty you know? it gives a little more instead of so much. you are a genius ^^ i hope to read more~ :D~
lindsay (Chapter 1) - Thu 05 Apr 2012
I love how you're doing this so far. I don't like very many of the fanfictions that are done in modern times, there are maybe a handful that I can think of sooooo keep doing what you're doing :) You're portrayl of Sesshoumaru is quite nice, same with Kagome and her short fiery temper. Very good ^^ Please update soon!
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