I think ur story is awwsome. I like the new characters. And I have one question which doesnt really need to be answered, why didnt Kikyo help? :growls: Really, refreshing story and hoping to read more :)

Great story so far. I love the originality behind it. I also love how it's a chapter story. It's so sad seeing less and less of them now-a-days. But great work with the descriptions they really pull it all together. I wasn't too sure about the present tense verbs, but once I got to the third chapter you were doing such a great job I didn't even notice them. ( It's nothing against you, I just prefer them to be in past tense). I will definitely follow this story in the future. And that chapter 5 spoiler made me review, I haven't logged in since mid december and have just been anonymously lurking for the past 2-3 weeks but I wanted to tell you that you are doing a great job so far. I just have some question though (it may be answered in later chapters and if it is great!)

1.) What happened to Kikyou?

Also I love your quotes at the beginning of the chapter they are so fun to read. Oh yeah I almost forgot. My shameless plug for more chapter. PLEASE UPDATE SOON!!! PUL-EASE!!!

 

I haveone thing to say...
MOOOOOOOOOOOOOORE!!!!!!!!!!!!
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That is all. :D

xoxo

I enjoyed this chapter very much. I don't know what it is but it seems to have an air of mystery about it. And is that Firery Red Head Ship's father?

Sounds interesting. Can't wait for the next chapter.

This would be me. "SHHHHIIIIIIIIITTTT!!!!!"

Please update soon.