Reviews for Musing Miko by Squash

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SammyJams (Chapter 32) - Tue 12 Jun 2018

How could you abandon it here?!?! I need more! I need the rest of the story!


333Tenshi (Chapter 32) - Thu 17 May 2018

This is an amazing story but it left off at such a major turning point. Had it been abandoned or is it continued on another site? Can the Godai Inus take on an Inu form? How powerful is Kagome going to be? I really would love to read more of this


Lady-Snake (Chapter 32) - Sat 22 Aug 2015

Omg please you MUST update I ADORE your writing!!! I've never laughed and reared up so much!!! Please get on and update soon!!!????????


Candy Graham (Chapter 2) - Thu 14 Aug 2014

being outside of your body must be creepy. your voice holds no sway. i wonder who induced this state and why they wanted her to see it....if it was naraku. what purpose would this encounter serve


Darkness living in Hope (Chapter 29) - Thu 04 Oct 2012

Great chapter. I so totally remember watching Alex mack when I was younger. Thought it would be totally cool to be able to change into a water like substance. Jealous of kagomes power lol


LoveAndFaith (Chapter 32) - Mon 01 Oct 2012

Keep it coming.


Deedee14 (Chapter 32) - Mon 01 Oct 2012

Ahhhhhh! You updated YAY! LOVED the new chapter! Please update soon! 


Angelika (Chapter 31) - Sun 23 Sep 2012

is there more or a seuqle it jsut can't end liek that it can't!


Deedee14 (Chapter 31) - Tue 21 Aug 2012

Awww...... Shippo is gonna end up blaming his self isn't he? :'( And he didn't get to eat his meal to begin his growth spurt. Please update ASAP! Love this story. My only complaint so far is that I think the relationship between Sesshomaru and Kagome was kind of rushed. But I still enjoyed reading it though. I just wish that there were a few more intimate interactions or alone time between them before they became mates.


shintochick (Chapter 31) - Mon 20 Aug 2012

Excellent job explaining Shippo's maturity.  The unique way that Naraku took hold of Kagome was great also.  Can't wait for the next chapter.  I'm eager to see what kind of monster Naraku birthed with Kagura.


LoveAndFaith (Chapter 31) - Mon 20 Aug 2012

Keep it coming.


LoveAndFaith (Chapter 30) - Tue 01 May 2012

Love this story, I rea it on fanfiction.


DemonQueen17 (Chapter 30) - Mon 23 Apr 2012

Do I see a budding relationship between Inuyasha and Kaede even though they're at each other's throat for the moment? They always start off when both are pissed at each other. I love it. I'm wondering about the whole thing with Kagura's adult spawn. Hmm, interestinger and interestinger. Want more.


Alexis (Chapter 30) - Sat 21 Apr 2012

Great handful of chapters the matting was hot I waskinda hoping keadie kick Inuyasha ass!!! Can't wait until the next chapters please update soon!!!!


Kristina Kimball (Chapter 30) - Sat 21 Apr 2012

hello,

 

I like this story.  it is well done.  I can't wait to see what happens next. 

good job and update soon...

 

:-)


LoveAndFaith (Chapter 30) - Sat 21 Apr 2012

Love the story, read it on fanfiction and here.


sugar0o who lurks (Chapter 30) - Sat 21 Apr 2012

awe! poor kagura! and yEy for updates! I'm going to have to re-read this fiction again! while i remember a lot of it, details are missing :3 either way good update ^_^


Amai Youkaiko (Chapter 18) - Sat 14 Apr 2012

It's good. I'm not really a fan of Kagome-turned-demon stories but you actually did a really good job at making it realistic. I love how you made Kaede and Kikyo the older sisters of Kagome but didn't make it so Kikyo was a bitch (meaning cliched and boring).

Could you possibly send me an update when you finish the chapters? Either though an inbox via my account or email me via amaiyoukaiko@gmail.com.


Alexis (Chapter 18) - Mon 02 Apr 2012

Great story I really love can't wait until the next chapters.!!!!! Please update soon!!!!!!??????????????????????????????


Maracuya-Chan (Chapter 18) - Wed 28 Mar 2012

Hey!I think the concept of ur story is really good and you write really well. I love how you portray Kagome and make her a powerful being with a big heart. I think at times the story drags because you write very much in depth about the Godou Youkai and expand on Kagome's mom's explanation. I think Kagome being back to the future and talking with her mom could have spanned one chapter instead of two and three. Its hard for readers to keep up with a story if it doesn't have significant action per chapter. Although Kagome's inner musings give an idea to the reader about how the character feels, I think you can get the same point across with  more dialogue and less "inner thoughts/dreams", which would help to move the story along and make it easier to read. I do really like your story and I only actually give reviews like these to fanfiction that I think have a lot of potential, so I hope you see this at what it is, constructive criticism/ suggestions so you can make your already good writing even better. Thanks for writing and good luck!


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