This brings back so many childhood memories!!! I loved Pokemon and to have the best of both worlds is just downright amazing!!! I can't wait to see what you have in store for this story :)
I think it's a good and interesting start. :) I don't know about your plans, but I kinda hope you are sticking fairly closely to the 1st generations' premises. I really really really like the concept, and I know this has the makings of becoming an awesome crossover!
I have to say, though, that the battle scene did not feel quite engaging as it could have felt, but I'm sure you'll get used to writing them as the story progresses. That, and it's understandable if they're a bit clumsy with their pokémon in the beginning.
dianne (Chapter 1) - Wed 21 Mar 2012
OMG, IT'S POKEMON!!!!!!!!!!!!!! <3
XD I freakin love you!!! XD haha
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