This was cute and you managed to keep them in character and fitting to the time period despite the clash of cultures :) Good job I thought it was cute and a nice read :)
I LOVE it! It was simply marvelous! Brava my dear! This is a masterpiece.
It is original, witty, romantic, and adventurous. Very well done! I look forward to reading more of your works.
~Sandreline
Very cute! Good job!
Toni (Chapter 1) - Mon 19 Mar 2012
I loved this! Plz make more chapters or a sequel!
Diane (Chapter 1) - Mon 19 Mar 2012
I really liked it overall. Umm a corsage is a spray of flowers worn on the wrist or as a broach, do you mean corset? As in an old fashioned bra slash torture device for women that went from chest to hips?
phizz (Chapter 1) - Mon 19 Mar 2012
I really like your story. It is well-written, especially for someone who doesn't usually write period pieces. Just one correction though: When you used "corsage" at the beginning, you meant "corset." A corsage is a small flower arrangement that a boy gives a girl to wear at prom, either pinned to her dress or worn around her wrist. A corset is the undergarment/torture device used to cinch in the waist, often lauded for giving abject discomfort to women in pursuit of fashion.
amy (Chapter 1) - Mon 19 Mar 2012
Wonderful story, I love it, I hope you will tell us what happens at some later time, this story is too good to be open ended!
Aww man I just realized this is a one shot. I would have loved to see this continued. Ideas of what could have happened are running through my head. Sigh. If you would not mind me maybe continuing this, I would like to.
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