Been reading this story 4 times and it still makes me cry...
Oh, gosh... -___- I keep on forgetting to log on before I review. Huh. Well, anyways, the anonymous review below is mines. :D It's a beautiful story.
Anonymous (Chapter 1) - Mon 19 Mar 2012
I LOVE it!! Although, a part of me kind of wished that Sesshomaru could've done something really romantic to show that he cared for her, too(besides rambling on and the windmill thingy lol). Oh well, it's already great the way it is. Thank you for writing.
CUTE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! I love it! I was heartbreaking but beautiful to read and it wasn't lemony! Although I do love your mature stuff this was amazing to read and just tugged at my heart strings in all the right places!!! Now I got back to working on a paper that was suppose to be submitted two days ago :) But this was an awesome diversion!!
Sophie (Chapter 1) - Sun 18 Mar 2012
Really cool story. I'm glad you decided that Kagome broke her engagment to Hojo, it's more beliveable for me that way. It just feels weird every time when people write that Kagome decided to move on to someone else. She waited 3 years to go back to Inuyasha - she's not someone who gives up love that easily. You kept her character very well! I'm certainly going to favour it! Love!
Lovedit (Chapter 1) - Sun 18 Mar 2012
Unbelievably adorable. I loved it!
Niche (Chapter 1) - Sun 18 Mar 2012
Cute and beautiful ^_^. Wouldn't even have known that it was out of your comfort zone. Well done.
D'AWWW!
Okay, so I'm a huge sucker for "lil kid love" stories as it is, but this one is soooo sweet! The only critique I can give is that I wish it was a multi-chapter, or had some Sesshomaru POV at least! It ended too soon, and I am really wondering how Sesshomaru's life went, who he married, are they youkai or human, so on and so forth... I want moar!!!
I think the best part was the "growing up" sequence; I really liked the first part, and I thought you nailed the "simple but serious" kid tone really well. The highschool bit made me wish my dances could have ended the way Kagome's did-- it was a memorable scene because I could really identify with it from my own experience, and I suspect a lot of readers will be able to as well. :)
Overall, great job!
-Sp@ce
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