I love it. Update soon please.
Interesting take. Fascinating that there were pups before Sesshomaru which his mother did not permit to live. A version of a canine's sometimes tendency to kill off the runts to better support the strongest, but based on looks? Makes one wonder if any of them would have been stronger than Sesshomaru. I'd like to think not, but then that's because he's my favorite.
Beginning paragraph needs to be fixed. You mention that "the age and wear" made "it rather difficult to make them out the ancient script" twice, back to back even. I'm sure it was simply overlooked.
Thanks for writing.
Oh Yippee! This looks to be a truly intriguing piece of work and I really look forward to seeing what Kagome unlocks within the mysterious tome (dunh, dunh, duuunnnh!).
Love it so far - you've hooked me in! Update soon :)
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