I'm really enjoying this and hope you'll continue. Looking forward to seeing how the other sins with will be explored.
Your rendition of the seven deadly sins challenge is wonderfully written. It is absolutely delicious. I love your characterisations of Kagome and Sessho.
Sessho's response to Kagome's accusation of being lazy in chapter two was funny and cute. It took him too long to respond, so I believe he totally made that up on the fly, but he did make his point as lame as it was...hahaha!!!
Giving a Latin term for each sin is brilliant and so is your little Latin learning corner. I hope that you keep giving us a little glossary of the foreign or foreign sounding words their meaning at ending of each chapter is a plus in my opinion. :)
Looking forward to the upcoming chapters. Keep up the fantastic writing and keep it going to the end. Excellent job!!!
Of course I love it. I am so excited you got in the reative writing program. Looking forward to what you give us in the future.
This was a cute chapter. like We the Latin Learning Corner too.
I love when you write. Will take it anyway it comes.
Leaora (Chapter 3) - Sat 28 Oct 2017
As always, lovely Yuki, you have ensnared me with your imagination and superb writing skill. I look forward to the continuation, no matter how brief the journey.
Love this story!
Such an insightful chapter. She may leave it for now but we all know Kagome. Sooner or later she will have it out of him. At least he was gracious in his answer to her. I really loved this update. Thanks so much. Cheers!
That was just AWESOME!!! I’m grinning like a silly kappa. Congrats on college. While you are doing the Fine Arts thing, remember to learn something that will get you through the tough times. Always have a Plan B (or C, D and E). It never hurts and it gives you stuff to write about. But never stop your SessKags, that would be terrible. Love your writing. Cheers!
I like it can't wait to read the rest.
Lovely. Nicely done and a Latin lesson. Wonderful! Thanks so much. Cheers!
He totally made that up.
He's a lazy guy.
I love the detachment.
And the cat like obsession.
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