Reviews for The Telling by Omizumaru

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jenny (Chapter 20) - Fri 30 Mar 2012

I just found this story today,read it all and I really like it (alot) but I'm a little confused at the way the last chapter ended. Kagome had thought that both inu brothers had the same golden eyes until the last chapter or 2 where she realized that Inu's eyes were more of a light gold and Sessh's were more of a rich darker gold or 'honey' colored, right? Then,when Inu took Kagome to the well and she jumped into it, in the past, (it said) they were both (unknowingly) being watched by another set of gold eyes (which could only be Sessh),right? Then,when Kagome exited the well house and walked up the steps of the shrine, in the future, it said:(I'm going to copy & paste the last sentence of the last chapter) As she walked into the cool evening air, she set the pack down and stretched. "It's good to be home." She said to herself. Picking up her pack and heading towards her house, she too was unaware of the honey eyes that watched her. (It said honey eyes,  meaning Sessh,right?)

 I'm so excited now because if Sessh is watching her in the future,the future Sessh already knows what's going to happen and as Inu's a hanyou we don't know if he'd still be alive 500yrs later but Sessh could easily live another 500yrs(and he likely wouldn't even age in that amount of time) or 5,000 yrs. I liked that neither Sessh or Kagome lied to Inu. I wonder if Shippo being full demon, would he smell Sessh on her whether she bathed or not ? If he did,would he know or understand what it meant or being so young would he see it differently,(like on an instinctual level)knowing that Inu's hurt Kagome(his mama) so many times,would he prefer her to be with Sessh, seeing him as the better male- a good,strong alpha that protects his pack and one who would honor Kagome as his mate and alpha female,never leave her to chase another female (alive or dead)? I was wondering, if Kagome and Sessh have already been mated for 5 centuries in the future that Kagome still lives in, would or could it be the pull that Sessh and Kagome feel towards each other when she's in the past??? Time travel is so strange and confusing, I was thinking, would it make sense for Sessh,in the future(if he's mated to Kagome), to be watching young Kagome go back and forth into the past, to make sure she ends up with him and he doesn't lose the mate, pups and family he's had for the last 500yrs (like,if the younger version of Kagome and himself,in the past, don't choose to be together,would it destroy what they've had?),would the future of themselves lose the family they've built together?

I can't wait to read more and find out what will happen next or any other info,hints or details...I might die of curiosity before the next chapter is up.


Maracuya-Chan (Chapter 20) - Fri 30 Mar 2012

Waah! did sesshomaru follow her through the well! he's so aggresive n proactive I love it! Kagome doesn't stand a chance. Poor Inu, he should learn a lil from Sess. BE AGGRESIVE! I can't wait for the next chapter. Thank you so much for writing!


MissKatt (Chapter 20) - Thu 29 Mar 2012

Ohhhhh Sesshou in her time?! Awesome. And I think Inuyasha's reaction was a lil OOC, but I'm sure you're making it work :)

-MissKatt 


Kanna37 (Chapter 20) - Thu 29 Mar 2012

Come on, everyone!  Where's the love for a good story?  There should be a lot more reviews than this - it's a good tale, and reviews - or the lack of them - can oftimes be the factor that decides a fic's fate. 

All I can say is I hope to see more, and definitely see some new chapters beyond what are already posted on MM soon!

Amber


cassandra (Chapter 20) - Thu 29 Mar 2012

I feel bad for Kagome. First she's in a love triangle with Inuyasha and Kikyo, now she's in one with Inuyasha and Sesshomaru!


Trelweny Rosephoenixwolf (Chapter 20) - Thu 29 Mar 2012

Well that is certainly a different take on an Inuyasha reaction. A nice surprise.

I have to say, I'm not as fond of Kagome pairing with Sesshomaru once Inuyasha starts coming around (ie not being such a verbal abuser and actually showing her some real affection) but I'm giving this a chance. Mostly 'cause it's well written. ;)

Thanks for writing!


Kuro-chan (Chapter 19) - Mon 26 Mar 2012
Oh my what a lusty hot chapter this was :) More please!

cassandra (Chapter 19) - Sun 25 Mar 2012

How could you stop there! It was getting good! Do some more as soon as you can. I'm really getting into this story.


Maracuya-Chan (Chapter 19) - Sun 25 Mar 2012

! so good! but what about Inu? I feel he's being neglected, poor guy, he needs to get some kagome loving too , he needs to be moe proactive haha. I am loving loving this, keep up the good work!


henandchicks (Chapter 19) - Sun 25 Mar 2012

Wow!  That's all I can say.  Until I catch my breath again, that is!


MissKatt (Chapter 19) - Sun 25 Mar 2012

Ohhhhh steamy ;) I loved ittt!

-MissKatt 


Haven (Chapter 18) - Fri 23 Mar 2012

Now I want to take a bath. Update soon!!!


henandchicks (Chapter 18) - Thu 22 Mar 2012

Please don't leave us hanging long!  This cliffie is killin' me!!!  (Love the story, BTW).


Maracuya-Chan (Chapter 18) - Thu 22 Mar 2012

great job!!! I can't wait for the next chapter and will enjoy reading how sesshy will make kagome "submit" haha!


MissKatt (Chapter 18) - Thu 22 Mar 2012

Ohhhh I would totally submit to him >3 ahaha great chapter!

-MissKatt 


zandria (Chapter 1) - Tue 20 Mar 2012

love your storiy can't wait fot the next update :)


Venita (Chapter 17) - Sun 18 Mar 2012

I can't wait for the next chapter, please update soon.


Venita (Chapter 16) - Sun 18 Mar 2012

That was HOT!


henandchicks (Chapter 17) - Sun 18 Mar 2012

Oh, my!  Wonderful chapter (and it was going to be hard to top that last one!!).  I am so glad that Inuyasha knows what Sesshomaru's intentions are now.  He might still be hurt if Kagome chooses Sesshomaru, but it wouldn't be the horrible betrayal that he'd feel if he hadn't seen it coming.  That makes me feel better, as I really like your Inuyasha (although I wouldn't be a member of this site if I didn't want Sesshomaru to wind up with Kagome).  

This story is enchanting.  Very well written and characterized, and nicely paced and plotted.  You are amazing!


henandchicks (Chapter 16) - Sun 18 Mar 2012

Wow.  Just...wow!!!


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