Reviews for The Telling by Omizumaru

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Roseanna (Chapter 1) - Mon 01 Aug 2016

I just finished reading to the last chapter posted (chapter 24), and I love the story.  I saw an Author's Note indicating there'd be 30 to 35 chapters, so I will say I wish that the rest of the story would have been posted to know how it turned out.  At least chapter 24 finishes up at least some issues, though I really wonder what happens afterwards.

Your writing style is fantastic, and I hope that one day you'll return (especially to finish this story).  Thanks for sharing your imaginations between these characters!


Jai (Chapter 1) - Wed 25 Jul 2012

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Trelweny Rosephoenixwolf (Chapter 24) - Sun 15 Apr 2012

...although logic might scream "duh" at them when they think about it later. It's not like the well is That far from the village to not hear an INUDAIYOUKAI howl.

Thanks for writing.


henandchicks (Chapter 24) - Sun 15 Apr 2012

Haha!  Take that, Inuyasha!


cassandra (Chapter 24) - Sun 15 Apr 2012

Yay! They finally got together! I can't wait to see how Inuyasha's going to act.


NanashiTenshi (Chapter 24) - Sun 15 Apr 2012

Maracuya-Chan (Chapter 24) - Sat 14 Apr 2012

Yes! I've been looking forward to this update the whole week and it's finally here! That was very steamy and it's nice that Sesshomaru has at this point figured out he loves Kagome. I feel bad for Inuyasha, to find out that way, through his brother's howl, that's gotta be rough! But hey, that's what happens to you for being such an idiotic two timing hanyou for so long so, way to go Kagome!


Maracuya-Chan (Chapter 23) - Sat 07 Apr 2012

Ahh! I can't wait for the next chapter! Kagome go for sesshomaru!!! He loves her so much and he told her basically he waited 500 years for her so she's gotta somehow put two and two together rite? Haha I love Inuyasha, even he's not stupid enough to figure out that his rather verbose brother kicked his confession's ass.  I really hope feudal era Sesshomaru's ice wall freezes pretty soon so that Kagome can feel his love, I really hope they make babies soon haha! Thank you for writing , I really look forward to your next update and ur story makes me happy *hugs* :) 


Maracuya-Chan (Chapter 22) - Sat 07 Apr 2012

Oh! I am so so sooo happy that this chapter is for me:) THANK YOU SO MUCH!  I feel honored, specially cuz u are like my favorite author!  Ahh it's so steamy! Damn u Inuyasha why do u have to interrupt the smutty goodness!? I'm  gonna read the next chapter now and  I'm so excited. Thank you so much for writing and providing me with awesome reading. 


MissKatt (Chapter 23) - Sat 07 Apr 2012

Ohhhhh, interesting :)


jenny (Chapter 22) - Mon 02 Apr 2012

That was great..all my worrying and at least now I don't have to worry about her returning to the past in 2 days as Inu's mate. I can't wait till Kagome returns...I wonder if Sessh will smell himself on her. I hope/wonder if Inu will do his usual immature act and just run and jump in the well and return to the past and go to Kikyo.I wonder if Sessh of the future can alter his appearance and still look he did in the past....he has to be using some kind of spell or glamour to appear human. I really hope his hair isn't cut off in all his forms....I love his long hair and what would his beast form look like....would it look like a giant shaved poodle?


cassandra (Chapter 22) - Sun 01 Apr 2012

Stupid Inuyasha! He just had to go and ruin their moment!


jenny (Chapter 21) - Sun 01 Apr 2012

I loved this chapter but it was so sad too. I wonder what happened to Naraku and the Jewel. If both Kikyo and Kagome died,while Kikyo the undead miko was the only being other than Kagome who can sense the shards-whether it's because (in this story) she has a part of Kagome's soul or ,if possible,Kikyo shares a connection to the jewel because Kikyo made Keade (as a small child,like Rin's age) burn the jewel with her body and maybe her soul became attatched to it and then, just as the jewel was carried within Kagome's body from birth, so was Kikyo's soul (I say this because if you recall,all the others that the crazy witch brought back to un-life,in clay bodies made of their ashes,got their entire soul & it is said that Kikyo got the soul stealers to steal souls so she could still use Miko powers & when Kikyo finally dies in the original story,all the stolen souls are released from her and NONE return to Kagome. If you look on Wiki,it says when the Kikyo died the final time in Inu's arms, her soul was freed.Which begs the question,if Kikyo had part of Kagome's soul why didn't Kags get it back when Kikyo finally died?) ?? Also,isn't Kagome the only one powerful enough to purify the entire jewel ? I'm dying to know what happened to the jewel after her death and wouldn't that mean she died without fulfilling her obligation to fix the jewel? I also wonder what happened to Shippo.

 In the book it says the Jewel was around for 500yrs,stolen by many demons & guarded by many miko's (going back & forth) until it was 'given' to Kikyo to guard. Kikyo was 1 of many guardians & was supposed to pass the jewel on when she could no longer guard it. So,if Kikyo 1st used the last of her miko powers to pin Inu to the tree with a sacred arrow, dying with her heart & soul filled with hate, anger & resentment and then,wished to take the jewel with her in death and had it burned with her body.What are the chances that she possibly died and was burned holding a tainted jewel in her hands?

 

Now,if what Sessh remembers correctly then Inu is going to be coming through the well,to the future, sometime later that night. So now, I only pray that Sessh doesn't putz around and take his time in telling her 'everything' - The truth(as she knows, he does not lie),including that he never left her but continued to watch over her. Allowing her space while he too tried to figure out his own feelings. How he admitted to Inu that he desired her as his own & wished to see her carrying his pups. (Indicating that when Kagome asked to go home for some alone time, Inu was aware that Kagome wanted time away from both Inu & Sessh, to think things through ALONE.) Sessh heard her say she needed time alone and watched Inu take her to the well and saw her jump into it. Sessh waited for her by the well,but a few hours later he saw Inu follow her into the well .

I hope Kagome being intelligent realizes that the Sessh who is there hasn't seen her in 500yrs and has lived through her death and suffered for it,while Inu will be showing up in a few short hours ignoring her desire for time alone to think (So that she'd have the time alone to think and not feel pressured by the presence or either Inu(of the present) or Sessh (of the past) and possibly end up with a fate as terrible as the fate that had befallen her.) I really hope whatever Sessh's plan is that it works,besides he's had 500yrs to find away to save her, make her his mate and keep her alive.. I cant wait to read more and find out what happens next.  I'm sorry my reviews are so long but I really love this story and I'm so enthralled with it that when I'm done reading it, I spend hours thinking of about it and looking forward to the next chapter.  Is this story posted on any other sites?

 

 


Kuro-chan (Chapter 22) - Sun 01 Apr 2012
Epic words for a situation like that. WTF indeed :) Love your storytelling. Onegai-shimasu post another chapter soon. I'm very eager to see what happens next :)

henandchicks (Chapter 22) - Sun 01 Apr 2012

Wow!  I just read the last two chapters back to back.  Very imaginative.  It was sad to read about Inuyasha and Kagome dying in the past, but really hot to read the lime in the last chapter.  Again, very creative!


Sblck (Chapter 22) - Sun 01 Apr 2012

I'm so glad you updated again

I love your story

Sess/Kag all the way

I hope Kagome dumps Inu b/c as much as I adore him he will ALWAYS compare kagome to Kikyou and no girl desirves to be 2nd best to a dead woman


Maracuya- chan (Chapter 21) - Sun 01 Apr 2012
You write so well! And this chapter makes me love sesshy, he loves her! He waits 500 years for her :) thank you for writing, I'm a bit bummed that u'll update only once a week cuz rthis fan fic is absolutely one of my favorites,but I understand ur busy :( (pouts) keep up the great work!

MissKatt (Chapter 21) - Sun 01 Apr 2012

Awewwwwe I loved this chapter! Hmmm I wonder what will happen ;) 

 


Venita (Chapter 20) - Sat 31 Mar 2012
Finally the bond is complete, the lemon was HOT!

Venita (Chapter 20) - Sat 31 Mar 2012

Keep it coming.


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