Reviews for Alpha-beta by Lady Nefertiti

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Azarius (Chapter 25) - Mon 26 Aug 2013

Your story and plot are too unsteady for my taste. I thought kikyo was alive thanks to the wish on the jewel? Did that not mean she no longer needed her soul eaters? Also the characters attitudes change rather quickly. Kikyo went from wanting the best to becoming out right rude. To be honest it feels as though there are chapters missing in the story. It doesn't make much sense With how the characters act. Forgive me if this sounds harsh, but it is only my opinion. 


Azarius (Chapter 17) - Mon 26 Aug 2013

This threw off everything and dived in far too quickly. Good part, but it seems so far out if place... Like it should have come later. 


LoveAndFaith (Chapter 26) - Wed 15 Aug 2012

The story was amazing and I enjoyed it, I'm wait to read Alpha beta part 2!


DemonQueen17 (Chapter 26) - Wed 15 Aug 2012

Nice ending to part 1. Hopefully, Inuyasha finds a mate of his own when he reaches the castle with his security detail. Maybe Hiko and Yushin have sisters (?) and Inuyasha could mate with one of them as revenge. That would be funny if that happened. Can't wait for part 2.


DemonQueen17 (Chapter 25) - Mon 13 Aug 2012

Isn't she supposed to be pregnant? How's that possible when she's undead? Hmm, more!


LoveAndFaith (Chapter 23) - Wed 08 Aug 2012

Keep it coming.


LoveAndFaith (Chapter 21) - Sun 05 Aug 2012

Keep it coming.


LoveAndFaith (Chapter 20) - Sat 05 May 2012

Keep it coming.


Maracuya-Chan (Chapter 20) - Wed 02 May 2012

Actually the dungeons sound like the perfect home to inu and kikyo, why hadn't anyone ever thought of that?


cassandra (Chapter 20) - Wed 02 May 2012

I liked the end of this chapter where Inuyasha was saying woe is me! Ha what an idiot!


Maracuya-Chan (Chapter 19) - Tue 17 Apr 2012

funny chapter!


cassandra (Chapter 19) - Tue 17 Apr 2012

Ha ha! Oh that was so funny! Inuyasha got thrown into the dungeon for being a loud mouth dumb ass!


cassandra (Chapter 18) - Tue 10 Apr 2012

Ha! Ha! It's about time Inuyasha got some kind of punishment other than Kagome's sits! I'm glad that the walking corpse is getting into trouble too. I serves her right for running her mouth!


Lyss (Chapter 14) - Wed 21 Mar 2012

love the story so far! ;) thanks for writing! :D


Lyss (Chapter 13) - Tue 20 Mar 2012

lol Love? haha I'm a tad confused - Sango was so angry at first, but now she feels the opposite? xD I look forward to more! :) Thanks for writing! :D


Lyss (Chapter 12) - Mon 19 Mar 2012

Oh, this is such an amusing story!! I love it! :D The way you described their reasoning for picking a miko seemed logical! lol xD Either way, it's funny!! I look forward to future updates! Thanks for writing! :)


Avidreader (Chapter 11) - Sun 18 Mar 2012

Ugh!  I KNEW I should have waited until you got to Z!  LOL

Nice, like the story and just really started getting into it when...there is no chapter 12 yet  -.-

 

I hope you update soon!  ^.^


Venita (Chapter 10) - Wed 14 Mar 2012

Keep it coming.


Venita (Chapter 9) - Tue 13 Mar 2012

Keep it coming.


Venita (Chapter 8) - Mon 12 Mar 2012

This chapter is hilarious, please updated soon.


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