Reviews for The Chase by Chaos Ninja

MythMagykFae (Chapter 3) - Thu 05 Nov 2015

Cool story so far! It's interesting to see Sesshomaru being mischievous  (;


Ashley bodden (Chapter 1) - Mon 03 Sep 2012

Heyyyy!! I just read your story and I gotta say you really know how to leave person hangin. Lol. Love the exitment of the chase. Can't wait to read more.


amy (Chapter 3) - Sun 06 May 2012

Excellent chappie, more, more


daapatemysoul (Chapter 3) - Tue 03 Apr 2012

It's a cute story so far. I will say that the random A/N in the middle of chapter 2 is a bit of a pet peeve of mine. Keeping the thoes at the beginning allows for the story to read more fluidly. As for what to do next, I say pick up where you left off, continuing the first encounter. ;)


Ravijnem36 (Chapter 3) - Sun 01 Apr 2012

Kag didn't interuped the game Sessh, she just make it a little more fun, that's all.

love the part when he sees "no one will ever know about this" funny how that was all that was holding him back


jenny (Chapter 3) - Sun 01 Apr 2012

I like this story and I noticed in Ch.2 it says :  In his Beast's eyes, she was the perfect Alpha Female. And his instincts told him that his Beast was right, but he refused to allow such a creature to affect him.

So, I can't help but wonder, aren't all 3 sides of Sessh actually just parts of HIM and what makes him Sessh? If his inner beast(his more primal side)sees as the perfect Alpha Female,his instincts agree and he dreams of her constantly (& considering that these- his inner beast,his instincts and the rational side of him that dreams/wants her are actually him,himself and Sessh sort of like,one would say-me, myself & I?)but he refuses to acknowledge what he actually wants (Kagome), would his inner beast and his instincts try to push or manipulate him into going after what they or really desires before the part of him that refuses to give in to what HE/THEY want (because 1 part of him is afraid of making the same mistake that his dad did)and does something stupid like the one they want(out of a stubborn misguided fear),causing them to lose the only being they've desired in such a way ? Does that make sense ?


megan007 (Chapter 2) - Sun 01 Apr 2012

This story is intresting, I love it, I like how his beast tells him Kagome is nothing like Inuyasha's mother, in fact I do not like Izayio one bit, in a way she does strike me as a weak human!!! for she was brought up as a noble woman and also I think I princess, most of them don't have a mind of there own and are pretty weak, I love your story keep it up.

 

Hugs

 

megan007


jenny (Chapter 2) - Sun 01 Apr 2012

I really hope you continue this, I'm very eager to see where it is going. There's only 1 thing I find confusing- it's that Kagome, after spending 3.5yrs (making her almost 19yrs old) of traveling across Japan with friends like Sango-a youkai slayer,Inu-a hanyou,Shippo-a full youkai,Kouga & his pack and allies(many of them youkai),along with all her experiences.... wouldn't she know better than to think or believe that a dai/tai inu youkai, such as Sessh (or any youkai, unless it was a low level youkai without the ability of rationalize thought or without the ability to take human form) would be chasing/hunting her to EAT her?  I mean if Sessh was the type of youkai who eats humans wouldn't Inu or 1 of her other friends or allies know this about him and warned her that he eats humans?? Unless before or while he was chasing her he made a comment to her about wanting to taste her, and she was naive or so scared that she couldn't think straight and took him literally, I'm dying to know why she believed he was chasing her to eat her. I can't wait to read more and find out what lead to what was going on in the beginning of Ch.1.


Ravijnem36 (Chapter 2) - Sun 01 Apr 2012

Yaaaaa, new chapter! I swear Sessh can be such a stick in the mud sometimes, makes his own beast want to smack him up side the head.

Thank you for updating!!


Ravijnem36 (Chapter 1) - Tue 06 Mar 2012

Need. More. Chapters. Please!

Can't wait to read what happens next.

Really want to know what brought this all on though, is Kag fertile or something?


jenny (Chapter 1) - Tue 06 Mar 2012

I really hope you continue this and soon. I can't wait to find out what happens next.


Venita (Chapter 1) - Mon 05 Mar 2012

This is interesting and that was hot, please update soon.


Arc-an Angel (Chapter 1) - Mon 05 Mar 2012

More! lol

It was great and I would like to see what happens next ^_^


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