This is a beautiful piece but at the same time confusing and depressing,  but I greatly enjoyed it.

Dont c get this on.???

Are you nuts. Eating her heart for company?..  much strange!

Keep it coming.

Keep it coming.

Wow, that was very Intense and Painful, but in a good kind of way! It's rare to find something so intense in just one page, but you did it really well!!

Disturbing and chilling. And yet....strangely compelling. A very interesting read.

The story was great.

I think fractured mind Sesshomaru is the most heartwrenching thing. Someone who prides himself on his control, the ability to let nothing phase him, is gone, leaving something something behind that is just irrevocably broken. This also speaks to just how intensely he can/does feel, and also makes me want to cuddle him.

This is so beautiful in its despair, its torment. I have a feeling that I will be thinking about this long after I log out. Yet another amazing addition to NIS.

Oh dear...now I want to know where she is!!! It makes me think she's dead but the ending didn't....unless he's really had a complete psychotic break, that is.

BAD HAT! you make r0o sad! fixit!

Okay this might sound totaly like terrible but I just could not stop laughing when he shoved his hand into her chest to grab her heart hehehehe ^-^

Nyuka

o.o This was perfect! Ty! I love you this has made my day. 

Shippo is such an underestimated character, and because he is a "child" it is so easy to forget that he feels love and hate just as much as the others, if not more because of the losses he has suffered and what he has seen. 

And in this he feels so strongly, all the love, the hate, and the utter despair leaps of the screen to create this world of total nothingness, a person who will only be complete with the restitution of blood. And it made me root for him; made me want him to get his retribution.

Awesome, awesome job!

Good grief! You have a knack for making me seriously enjoy these horrifying "what if" shorts. I like it...but hate it, y'know? Great job!

You have quite a way with words and painting a quite vivid picture. I can't wait to see what happens next :)

Once again you have left me utterly speechless. I have been sitting here for 30 minutes trying to figure out what I want to say and how to say it. 

All that angst and the tragic-ness in the love, the need, he has for her. It is strangely breathcatching in it's beauty. What he feels is so raw and it comes across so so perfectly.

I said in the last review and I will say it again, you have definitely set the bar high in regards to the level of writing you produce.

Perfectly done, Hat love 

o.o 

Hat... words allude me in the best possible way right now.

All that anguish, melancholy, and confusion was so powerful. It was in every word; it just seemed to slam into me and imprint itself in my mind. 

So beautifully done, so well written. Perfection. This is the level of writing that I hope to one day achieve. 

Simply amazing Hat love

I had forgotted what an amazing charcter Miroku could be...until I read this. I love how he is accepting the burden of his knowledge of what is going on, instead of telling Inuyasha or even confronting Kagome. He safeguards her happiness like she did for them when on the hunt for Naraku. And it is heart-warming that he knows that this is the least that he can do for her in being her Sentinal.

Beautifully, beautifully written and done.

while it seems easy to determine Sesshoumaru and Kagome,  I must assume that the third male isn't inuyasha.. because why else would you talk of her outgrowing him, and why else would she have to sneak to be happy.. so of course since the third is not sesshoumaru, who could it be?  xD