Wow! This was so hot! Great plot and two very hot and steamy encounters. Great job Theia
LOVE LOVE LOVE LOVE LOVE! I feel like I'm watching NCIS: LA, but with my two favorite characters EVER!
Please Update soon, again, LOVE LOVELOVELOVELOVE!<3
Hot! I love how you started this story hot and end it with an even hotter chapter! Awesome story my only regret that it was so short because it was so amazing but then all good things must come to an end. :) Maybe somewhere down the line you'll crave to write a one shot for it... :)
amy (Chapter 4) - Wed 15 Feb 2012
Too good for valentine's day!
Luna (Chapter 1) - Wed 15 Feb 2012
Amazing!! hot stuff, goddess!!
Action packed awesomeness!!!! I love it and kind of never wanted it to end... The chemistry in action between them is awesome!
Oh my gosh! This is so awesome! I have no idea what plot bunnies run around in your head but they are amazing! The details are just brilliant! I'm kind of sad that this story is only so long but I have yet to read the next chapter so off I go!
That was so hot and then you made it turn so cold literally with just that mention of the one word! I loved the twist did not see that coming! Awesome work as always this is rapidly becoming my favourite piece of yours!
I just...I don't have any words. *bows down to your literary prowess* Forgive me, for I do not have the proper words to articulate how much I enjoyed reading this story. The action, the plot, the sex...I just have no words. Amazing~
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