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Anonymous (Chapter 10) - Thu 11 Jul 2024

Hi I hope you're doing well! The summary hooked me in and I enjoyed what I read so far. I hope that someday you'll come back and finish this bc it has potential!! I don't exactly know how I feel about the last couple chapters bc it felt like it was a little too fast and there wasn't enough context/explanation of their relationship and feelings to this point imo but I can see the potential flashback to show their relationship develop to be where it is. I would love to see you expand on the demon world/politics/pack dynamics and how you'd incorporate the museum aspect again. I hope you'll come back and finish it!!


Andrea (Chapter 10) - Wed 29 Oct 2014

what!! that was all !!!  what happened  with the anger , he deserved a good kick  where  it hurts . Loved the chapter update soon please


Emily (Chapter 10) - Tue 14 Oct 2014

I just started reading your story today. I love it! I can't wait to read more, I really enjoy your portray of sesshomaru.


rose (Chapter 10) - Tue 14 Oct 2014

next chapter please


KEdakumi (Chapter 10) - Tue 14 Oct 2014

I think I'd have held that anger a bit longer knowing that he basically forced himself on her. I feel like she was alittle quick to forgive even saying 'sure, you forced this, so I'll have sex with you soon. Hey, I am not as bothered add I said or thought, let's lay here together'. Even despite her feelings for him, he took part of her away. Just a thought.

I am looking forward to the next chapter. 


Andrea (Chapter 9) - Sun 13 Apr 2014

I totally love it , i  love your writing style and ability please please update i want to know what happens next how she'll react and what  sesshomaru will say please please update , this story is so great to be abandoned


KT (Chapter 9) - Sun 17 Nov 2013

Hi Kayla, 

I just wanted to let you know that this story is still and always will be one of my all time favourites! I really hope you can update, your writing is amazing, and I can't wait to read more! :)

A big fan,

Karen


KT (Chapter 9) - Fri 04 Oct 2013

This is the story I have been looking for,for a long time.  Please update! So we can find out about poor Kagome's state of health and what REALLY just happened ;D I can't wait!

 


Seraphina Dragon (Chapter 9) - Thu 01 Aug 2013

please update soon please


Katrina Kee (Chapter 9) - Thu 01 Aug 2013

Delicious! Please update!


I Love The Stuff I Review (Chapter 9) - Wed 19 Jun 2013

*stares* *stares* *stares* *stares* *stares* ... WHERE IS THE REST?!?!?!?!?!?!!?!?!?!?!


Grimmichi (Chapter 9) - Fri 22 Feb 2013

WHAT NOOOO you can't end the chapter like that!!!! get back on and tell me what happened!!!!!


Grimmichi (Chapter 7) - Thu 21 Feb 2013

hahaha i LOVED the by-play in this chapter!


Kitsune Diva (Chapter 9) - Fri 22 Jun 2012

I love your story. The plot is great and unique. I like how you try to keep the readers constantly guessing. You stay true to the nature of your characters but still allowing them to change. I like how you weave in important information instead of allowing it to blob in parts of the story. The story is well written. I shall await your next chapter with great eagerness.


LoveAndFaith (Chapter 9) - Sat 16 Jun 2012

Keep it coming.


Suka25 (Chapter 9) - Fri 15 Jun 2012

NOOOOOOO! I cant wait till the next chapter!

 

~*Dragon*~


Laura (Chapter 1) - Thu 14 Jun 2012

I love this story. And please don't leave us hanging forYao long, please? 


KEdakumi (Chapter 8) - Sat 31 Mar 2012

I wonder if she was hearing the 'Jaws' theme song as she was running around.  Please update soon!


Alexis (Chapter 7) - Sun 19 Feb 2012

I'm glad sesshomaru killed that bitch. Can't wait until the next chapter


KT (Chapter 7) - Sun 19 Feb 2012

End to fun, or leads to more fun XD 

Nice chapter! Looks like Sesshoumaru hasn't changed that much over the years. 


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