I think I'd have held that anger a bit longer knowing that he basically forced himself on her. I feel like she was alittle quick to forgive even saying 'sure, you forced this, so I'll have sex with you soon. Hey, I am not as bothered add I said or thought, let's lay here together'. Even despite her feelings for him, he took part of her away. Just a thought.
I am looking forward to the next chapter.
Andrea (Chapter 9) - Sun 13 Apr 2014
I totally love it , i love your writing style and ability please please update i want to know what happens next how she'll react and what sesshomaru will say please please update , this story is so great to be abandoned
KT (Chapter 9) - Sun 17 Nov 2013
Hi Kayla,
I just wanted to let you know that this story is still and always will be one of my all time favourites! I really hope you can update, your writing is amazing, and I can't wait to read more! :)
A big fan,
Karen
KT (Chapter 9) - Fri 04 Oct 2013
This is the story I have been looking for,for a long time. Please update! So we can find out about poor Kagome's state of health and what REALLY just happened ;D I can't wait!
please update soon please
Delicious! Please update!
*stares* *stares* *stares* *stares* *stares* ... WHERE IS THE REST?!?!?!?!?!?!!?!?!?!?!
WHAT NOOOO you can't end the chapter like that!!!! get back on and tell me what happened!!!!!
hahaha i LOVED the by-play in this chapter!
I love your story. The plot is great and unique. I like how you try to keep the readers constantly guessing. You stay true to the nature of your characters but still allowing them to change. I like how you weave in important information instead of allowing it to blob in parts of the story. The story is well written. I shall await your next chapter with great eagerness.
Keep it coming.
Suka25 (Chapter 9) - Fri 15 Jun 2012
NOOOOOOO! I cant wait till the next chapter!
~*Dragon*~
Laura (Chapter 1) - Thu 14 Jun 2012
I love this story. And please don't leave us hanging forYao long, please?
I wonder if she was hearing the 'Jaws' theme song as she was running around. Please update soon!
Alexis (Chapter 7) - Sun 19 Feb 2012
I'm glad sesshomaru killed that bitch. Can't wait until the next chapter
KT (Chapter 7) - Sun 19 Feb 2012
End to fun, or leads to more fun XD
Nice chapter! Looks like Sesshoumaru hasn't changed that much over the years.
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