So good, I can't wait for the next chapter, please update soon.
Venita (Chapter 2) - Fri 03 Feb 2012
I'm surpise Kouga is the one who raped Kagome.
Lumi (Chapter 4) - Thu 02 Feb 2012
I don't recall you mentioning anything about her changed appearence earlier. Perhaps I missed it, but if not, it's a rather important detail to have left out till now, I believe.
phoenixgodess75 (Chapter 4) - Thu 02 Feb 2012
ok now we r getting some where. i'm going crazy waiting for your next chapter. i'm loving this story so far. so keep up the good work, and i'll keep reading. the only thing i wish to see u improve on is the lenght of your chapters.
I can't wait to read more!!
Im curious about what wish could it b that she made that would have these kind of consecuences, hope to read u soon :)
This is shaping up to be quite the intriguing tale! I'm so glad that you decided to try your hand at writing and are posting it here. Thanks so much for sharing your creativity with all us greedy readers!!! Can't wait to see how this progresses, for sure (gah, and I'm abusing punctuation again - sorry)!
:D
~~Wiccan~~
Kasey (Chapter 4) - Wed 01 Feb 2012
Great chapter! hurry and post the next one please :3
I have 2 say that I absolutely love this story and it is incredibly well written. But I would only ask thatI you write longer chapters that is the only thing that is currently throwing me off of it. I can not wait for more
Kasey (Chapter 3) - Wed 01 Feb 2012
I have to say that i am already hooked on this story, the only complaint i have is how short the chapters are, but there so well written and they keep my interest, so i guess i really don't mind the shortness . Hurry and update soon, i can't wait to see how this story will go :)
Lumi (Chapter 3) - Wed 01 Feb 2012
Certainly an interesting take on a delicate subject.
I'm curious to see how Sesshomaru will be worked into this.
Post it post it post it :)
Venita (Chapter 1) - Tue 31 Jan 2012
This story is interesting, did Naraku rape Kagome? Please update soon.
phoenixgodess75 (Chapter 1) - Tue 31 Jan 2012
so far i can say i'm looking forward to your next chapter. i would like to see longer chapters though.
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