I really liked this one :)
though I thought that we would hear more about her dreams. (if you know what I mean ;) ) 

I for one would like to say that even with your self claimed slight clumsiness with English, you did well. If you'd like someone to beta-read this for you, I could help you with that. ^_^ but enough of that. I really enjoyed the story, the originalty of the plot had me smiling the entire way through.

Write lots, and have fun.  ~Sy

So, the first thing I want to do is thank you! I really appreciated the fact that you took my challenge and I admit, you went in a direction I had not anticipated. With that said, I would critique that there were a few spots here and there that could have used a few word changes. Overall, however, I was deeply impressed by your details. And as I said, I had not expected you to take the story in the direction that you did. I really liked the idea of Kagome seeing Sesshomaru's demon side in the mirror. Sesshomaru's character was handled very well...and Kagome had me laughing at times with her "sexual fustration." :P Speaking of sex...that lemon scene was HOT! Very...very...nice. So again, thank you so much for participating in the challenge! You really did an amazing job! XD THANK YOU!

Great story and hot lemon.

More than refreshing, sweet beyond words, you made my day with your story of love renewed, healing of old wounds and of course nightmares that could make your insides curl, but not   Kagome, she knew deep down it was him her love and salvation...

A job well done, keep up the good work and write more  stories of hope for the rest of us, who need the encouragement and a stiff backbone....