Well, a lot sure has happened here. Kagome and Sesshoumaru are becoming closer and closer and yet now have to fight against that. and Sesshoumaru is sure in trouble. He needs to return to the past but now has tasked himself with keeping Kagome of the future safe. I wonder how their trip will turn out, especially with him cuffed. I can't wait to see what happens next and where you take us all (glad you got your new laptop) :)
I don't understand.
Did they mate? Just by him licking her?
I'm so confused.
Why did it take that long to trigger his posessive instinct? I mean, if it really were that basic animal instinct, shouldn't he had felt it as soon as he had given her oral sex?
I don't get it...! T_T
Anyhow, keep them coming. =)
sweet baby jesus this is a great story! I love the concept and the execution of it. The characters have such depth and tho you say beware the OOC I can only thank you for the OOC. I can't wait to find out what happens next!
Koga is turning into such a whiny baby. Buuuuuut! I think I may know what's coming up ;-) Hee-hee. I won't say anything now incase I'm right & it spoils the layout.
And noooooo cuffing him by that lame hater priestess! :-( That's all bad. She's just mad Kag's has 2 hot youkai males on her team... jealous got mega-lame-chick strapped for real.
I really loved your story!!!!!!! i read all the chapters, one after another xD... update soon :D
That was so.... Hot. Mmmmm! I can't wait to see what happens next!
Wonderfully written.
I craved the intimacy and you gave us just that in your last installment.
Now I crave a little romance.
Maybe you'll give us that, too?
Hopefully, the trip will go better than I picture it going... I have a feeling Sesshoumaru will unknowingly betray Kagome.
Keep up the great work!
xoxo
Loveyaa (Chapter 14) - Fri 22 Mar 2013
Well now...this was quite a chapter. Sesshoumaru and Kagome seem to be taking one step forward, two steps back in their relationship. I wonder who will outsmart the other, or come up with the better plan. I can't wait to see what happens next and what becomes of the prisoner :)
Last paragraph is supposed to be Koga barking out a loud laugh...
Just thought you'd like it if I pointed it out. :)
Other than that, great job. Wonderful plot.
I love it.
And I don't see Sesshoumaru or Kagome was OC at all. I think that this is how they'd handle the situation exactly.
Cheers for such an awesome ff ;)
Way to go Sesshoumaru! You're digging your own grave there. I do not think Kagome was completely bought in by his explanations and that it will be angsty when everything comes to light in front of her. :( Silly dog!
Update soon!!
~Voracious
This chapter ROCKED!!!! Dude, through the whole citrus scene I caught myself leaning closer & closer to my laptop screen in anticipation, BEGGING for it not to turn out to be only a dream - OMG yay it really happened!! This chap had it all... Oh wow... yup, you totally rule! :-D
And poor naive Koga - really? He needs to get a clue. Did he actually throw a girly tantrum? *LOL* "you like Sess & not me - waaahhh boo-hoo!" Great protector, loyal friend... but beyond that there's nothing. I love how she explained he is like family to her.
Sess still needs to come clean to a degree. And now that Koga's pissed off, I have no doubt he will do whatever it takes to discredit & destroy Sesshomaru in Kags eyes. Sess doesn't need to aid in his own demise by being shady on his own. He needs to cement his place as someone she can trust.
Congrats on the new laptop - may the delivery guy hurry the hell up! *LOL*
Loveyaa (Chapter 13) - Wed 20 Mar 2013
well lets see if Kagome is playing him here. I wonder who else got sent back. I wonder how they'll meet up and if Kagome will allow it. I can't wait to see what happens next and what Sesshoumaru does with his info about Kagome :)
25ruby (Chapter 13) - Tue 19 Mar 2013
i love google docs.....
thanku for posting! Awesome chapter can't wait for more :-D
You're back in the matix - yayness! Looooooove this story. The loudest fangirl squeal I've made in years errupted from my throat when I got the update alert on my phone! I think Kags was eavesdropping to an extent... or using some sort of spell to overhear. Perhaps to test his honesty in a way. Sess should come clean. Well maybe not about everything but more than the bland b/s he told her just now. Or make her a deal... let him meet this time traveler & see if the stranger can get him back to the past in time to save her. Perhaps he can stop the war altogether...? Not without her help though & dang sure not without her trust. Super-duper yay!
A much awaited update after a long time. Eager to know how it all turns out now that Sesshou has just lied to Kagome. Love this fic, looking forward to the next update!
~Voracious
Loveyaa (Chapter 12) - Wed 20 Feb 2013
I liked this chapter. They all got something off of their chests and we finally found out what happened to Kagome. Now I just wonder how much more prodding it will take Sesshoumaru to truly do someting about it, if he ever returns. Don't know if he will do more damage to this Kagome or the rebels. Nice job of handling the emotions behind it all (from them all). I can't wait to see what happens next :)
Yay an update! Awesome chapter.
D:!!!
Poor Kagome T^T I can't believe that all happened to her. Made me so sad...and the way the past Sesshoumaru reacted to it. TSK. But I LOVE how he is beating himself up about it now. Hopefully he can go back and fix it!
Great chapter, Smo!
This is such a unique story - I love it! I'm hoping that if Kagome does give Sesshoumaru the hourglass, he'll make the right choice...but I guess I'll have have to see, lol. Please update soon!
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