Kagome is definitely growing with Sesshomaru the little things count , great chap
Finally caught up. saw this bad boy and decided to hold my comments till the end. I like the story. Never before have I felt so conflicted when reading a story. The desire for a female to be in power verses the oddity of when she actually is. She was saying that males can be stubborn ect. in a way that females typically weren't but that could of been her rage talking because history has shown that women could be just as faulty as men. Especially when they can lead and do it through manipulation of the male in power. History has shown time and time again the strength of an intelligent woman, scorned woman as well as women with a purpose. It seems this story portrays her in all those lights so it's so interesting. As for Sesshomaru, that is interesting in itself. I had never felt much pity towards him as I did when he was held captive in the first chapters. It was amusing and odd at all times. I was like, "No!! Don't embarrass the man!" and at the same time was like; "Well why he so shocked when it's something expected of women on a daily basis but that does not make them any less."
Sure I felt that Kagome took it a bit too far borderlining slavery wiht the cuffs on em and it was somewhat smoothed over by the ability that they were more or less "free" but yea... for story purposes, I see why it done. Idk if I could write all of my thoughts but this is too long already. Overall I like the story a lot and am impatiently waiting on the update!
Woo woo. Another update nice!!! Can't wait to read more.
Omg you have NO idea how I literally squealed & freaked out when I got the update email for this!! I went back a few chapters to refresh a few things. Just know I LOVE this story & you are so awesome for continuing it!
Interesting story. I've become captivated. Any moment I could spare I spent reading. Took me three days but I finished! Can't wait for your next update.
A part of me doesn't want Kagome to have the baby... but the other side of me is interested in seeing how the story progresses and how you use your literary skills to convey and weave a compelling tale that plays on the reader's emotions. I loved the confidence Kagome oozed in the future. I anticipate how her development comes about. I'm almost impatient to see the transformation. A part of me wants you to skip things and get right to it... the other side wants you to take your time and allow the transformative period to come naturally. With Sesshoumaru's involvement though, I somewhat fear she won't be the same... which is the goal... you intend to make her happy... but will she be just as strong? I'm partially curious to know what happened and how she developed in the other timeline where she was partially secluded save from Jiniji and Rin.
Keep up the great work!
-Kendra
Oh my gosh that chapter was just amazing!!!!!!!!!!! I love love love the reactions and banter!
Wow what a chap!!! So many interesting things happening. I love it!!!
Miroku! And son???
hoolllyyyy crap. What will Sesshy do now?!?!
Hmmmm very interesting!!!
Way. Out. There. Mannnn. Awesome!! Absolutely loving this! Soooo many quuestions that i need answered!!!
I gobbled this story up! It’s absolutely amazin! I can’t wait for more!
Nono onononono
not shippo! Nonononono. :-(
Oh my my my!!! PLEASE tell me that someone somewhere drew a picture of Kagome with that bow and exposed chest! Must be an absolutely stunning visiua!
anyways, great chapter! I love how she was able to think through that all and perform like that but now drop from the exhaustion! Such an incredibly strong Kagome!
.... I love this story!!! While I do definitely wonder what in the world could have caused such a change in Kagome... I like it when Sesshy is dominated! Makes me all hot and bothered hahaha.
Looking forward to more updates on this story. I really liked the alternate universe, and now how Sesshomaru is going to deal with things now that he's back. Keep writing! :)
Yay, things seem to be moving in the right direction. Love it :)
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