Please continue the story. You are handling the subject in a clear yet gentle manner. Thank you for sharing your talent and stories.
Ah this one is a gem as well! Please return to writing if you have possibilities, I know life takes precedence, so we will wait but hope you will not abandon this!
Take care!
Where have you been? It's been two months and two weeks since you updated, I'm glad your back. Great chapter, please update the next chapters soon and not in months. Keep it coming.
Interesting story. Please update soon. =)
I like it! I really really like it! Keep up the good work and please update soon!
this is a gorgeous story and i cant wait to see what happens next please please continue!
Keep it coming.
I have this strong feeling (i really do!) that I've read this fic before. I'm not sure if this is a revamped version of it but, I, definitely, am happy to see it back. The pace of the story is great and has just the right depth. Looking forward to the next update!
~Voracious
~~Oooooooo I was so excited to see you'd updated! :D Fantastic, can't wait for more!
Keep it coming.
This chapter was very hard to read, it came out as a wall of text. :S
You should edit it into paragraphs as soon as possible, as this is a good story. I would hate for you to loose readers over it.
I look forward to your next update either way! :)
~Starfyre
~~Hey! Hey! You planning on continuing this one?? Pleeeeeeeease! ;D
Wow... so not what I expected but an amazing piece of work and your portrayal of Kagome is different in a good way, she's matured a lot. I just had a quick question as I was a little unclear in the first chapter but did Inuyasha rape Rin and then Kagome or was it only Rin that he got to? Just a little confusion over that part. :) Good job on your depiction of Sesshoumaru as well
Love this story.
I don't think I've seen this angle before, but I do like it! Can't wait for the updates!
wudelfin (Chapter 3) - Wed 08 Feb 2012
yep,dogboy dies, seerval times then suffers in hell only to be brought to life again. great story!!
Rape is always a tragic thing, and I only hope that Rin will get through it with Kagome's guidance. ;')
sniff poor sesshomaru , i feel for him thegirl he considerd his own is very hurt now kagome has to help them and her self --- Gah i got all emotional there lol
Good plot.....chapters need to be longer and more descriptive, but otherwise pretty good.....can't wait to see how this one turns out!
Venita (Chapter 3) - Tue 07 Feb 2012
Poor Rin, please update soon.
COAIM (Chapter 3) - Tue 07 Feb 2012
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