I'm hooked and following, but unfourtunately I don't have time to praise all my favorite things about this newly discovered story and to leave a good review. Know that I love it and am awaiting the next chapters.
This story is AMAZING so far! I love stories in the canon-verse that bring demon instincts into the plot, and the thought of Kagome becoming a demon is explained very well in yours!
She also sounds like a rather good looking demon, demon-wise, haha. I'll enjoy reading more as she learns more about what she has become. I'm curious about just who took the rest of Kikyou's soul from her, and if Kikyou has any ulterior motives in joining Inuyasha again. I'm hoping she doesn't, because I rather enjoy stories more where she isn't necessarily evil, even if she's willing to do evil deeds to get a job done.
Well, good luck with the rest of your story, and happy writing!
mburn (Chapter 4) - Sat 28 Jan 2012
i just loove this story its funny and its got some twists in it that i can say ive never seen before, hope to read more soon :3
KT (Chapter 4) - Sat 28 Jan 2012
Error, lots of error, I loved that sentence! Epic! and so so true!
Wow that was a great chapter. I loved how Temujin is just along to get amusement and Kagome knows not to show complete trust to someone who has just recently joined the group.
I can't wait to find out what happens next!
Man I love this story! It's different and kinda new I hope you can write another chapter soon. I'll be cheering on the sidelines.
Forbidden-Hanyou (Chapter 3) - Wed 25 Jan 2012
Awesome! Loved the reunion scene! i was NOT expecting it! keep up the good work~! :)
honestly, i would think kagome would reject inuyasha completely. he shows no true alpha qualities. hell not even beta. omega is more his speed.
I personaly hope kagome out ranks kikyo in power over the jewel. the jewel rejecting kik for kagome. it would make sense, the jewel has both nigen and youkai auras. now that would be such a sight!! maybe helping kagome take one youkai form.
hmm, a shapeshifter like naraku, kitsune? eh, a thought.
Anonymous (Chapter 2) - Tue 24 Jan 2012
I really like your premise, and was pretty enthralled for the duration of these two chapters. Keep up the good work. :D
Anonymous (Chapter 2) - Tue 24 Jan 2012
Wow,this looks like a very interesting plot. :) i cant wait to read more, please update soon.
Forbidden-Hanyou (Chapter 2) - Mon 23 Jan 2012
Yay~! You updated! I love all the little details and new things I've never seen that you keep coming up with! :) Keep them coming, and I promise to comment on EVERY chapter of this AMAZING story~! ;)
hkyadte (Chapter 2) - Mon 23 Jan 2012
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Forbidden-Hanyou (Chapter 1) - Sat 21 Jan 2012
OMFG! That was so interesting, different, and amazing! PLEASE update as soon as you can! I'll be waiting~! ;)
Ashes (Chapter 1) - Sat 21 Jan 2012
Very nice. I really like the fresh take on the mythos of fudal japan. I may be a little biased because my favorite Saiuki character is a guy turned demon. I really like that Kagome's human form isn't altered by the fact of her being a demon and the idea that not only is she young but that she's actually separated from her body.
Not only all that but your writing style is easy to follow! You get brownie points!
now this look promising!!
Anonymous (Chapter 1) - Fri 20 Jan 2012
This is a very interesting premise. Although Kagome as a demon has been done before, you definitely have a fresh take on it and I like that you seem to be creating your own mythology and your description of Kagome as a spirit demon (that she looks a "mess" makes her a little more relatable). Looking forward to the next chapter!
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