I know the story isn't beta'd, so the occassional error is to be expected, but in the middle of this chapter you suddenly switch to first person and then back to third. It's very jarring.
Alexis (Chapter 22) - Wed 19 Sep 2012
Great story can't wait untill the next update please update soon!!!!!!!!!!
Keep it coming.
lol...good chapter. Keep it up.
Wow! This story is really getting heated! I can't wait to see what happens next!
This is a great story so far! I can't wait to see what happens next!
joyouki (Chapter 1) - Tue 31 Jan 2012
Wow very very good! I like Kagome being fiesty! I like Sess saying "I am not a thing" made me laugh...Peeping Sess LOL
Venita (Chapter 5) - Sun 22 Jan 2012
Great chapter, please update soon.
Venita (Chapter 4) - Sun 22 Jan 2012
I can't wait for the next chapter to see Kagome reaction, please update soon.
Avy (Chapter 4) - Sat 21 Jan 2012
| I have a minor gripe: you sometimes switch from first to third person in the same sentence. And other spelling and grammatical errors. I still like the story so far, and want to see where it is going. Please update soon!
jojo661538 (Chapter 4) - Sat 21 Jan 2012
wow i really like your story i cant wait until the next chapter seriously what made kagome change keep up the great work i hope to read more soon ^_^
Venita (Chapter 3) - Thu 19 Jan 2012
Both chapters are great, please update soon.
Marissa (Chapter 3) - Thu 19 Jan 2012
Please Continue this!! IT is so amazing I'm in suspense as to what is going on!! Its an amazing story, I LOVE IT!!!
When I read this,"Sesshomaru would watch her alright, but it might just kill him", I automatically think that he's gonna die by a boner. Lmfao. Btw, that was a quick update! Thanks. ( :
Rubs hands in glee
Another of your beautiful ideas, eh? Hehehhehehehe.
Venita (Chapter 1) - Wed 18 Jan 2012
This story is interesting, please update soon. HAPPY NEW YEAR!
wow this is great so far. So has she trained in any of her powers or combat? Please update soon.
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