Good story 

ohhh she got a semi compliment!! I look forward to more!

I sm really enjoying this version of Kagome!!

ohhhh such an interesting first chapter and indeed Inuyasha has no honor like Sesshomaru does. Thank kami for Kagome!

Aah that was awesome, also poor shippo I would have been mad too

I truly hope that you update this story.  It's been very entertaining! 

Please Update!!!!!!!!!

I am trying not to laugh too loud & wake everyone up... but Sesshoumaru taking enjoyment from Inuyasha's jealousy is hilarious......

You have amazing stories.... that are incomplete T_T *cries pitifully in a corner*

Oh and your portryal of Kagome is divine, I forgot to add! ^.^ You've balanced her quite nicely according to both the anime and manga. She's sweet and yet still works herself to the bone to help others, thats what she did to Inuyasha and he tried to kill her seconds after knowing her. Kouga who kidnapped her; Kagura even was first trusted by Kagome; Kikyou who made it her after-lifes sole mission to kill Kagome for being 'in the way' of her and Inuyasha. The list goes on and on, but what I am trying to say is that Kagome's restraint with Sesshomaru's 'stand-offish' attitude is a testimate to her patience and self control from dealing with Inuyasha, both the hanyou and Koga and so on and so forth. Kagome being nothing but even tempered and despite it all, often sweet to Sesshomaru is a testimate TO her STRENGTH of character and just how 'pure' her soul is supposed to be= A very IC Kagome.

Very well done with her, as well my friend ^.^

~ Azuka Ahara

>>................on my dear, dear Rinku... Had I known!!! Had I only KNOWN my good sir..... >:]

I told you, you were amazing and it shown through in spades; the fight scenses are brushed elegantly and perfectly blended with just enoiugh detail and emotion that the movements become real in the mind's eue. The words so artfully arranged they become an actual conversation, and I can HEAR Sesshomaru's voice! Inuyasha's rants put me in mind of the manga! 

Of course, I must say that Sango beats on Miroku a bit too much; almst every scene... I understand he is a pervert, you should show his intellectual side a little more. Outside of the constant beatings, you've stayed very much in character ^.^ and I hav no complaints save of course that I just read the last chapter you have uploaded and I must warn you.... I am prone to stalking and harrasing on occasion <3

All in all my friend, I give this story a brilliant five out of five stars!! It's building up to be quite the Epic and I sip[ly cannot wait to see the story unfold a little piece at a time. Keep up the good work Rinku! 

OH! One more thing! :) I agree completely with you on the count of your portrayal of Sesshomaru! Very well done indeed my friend! Very well done. He doesn't speak too much or too little, and his insults are little catch 22's in the aspect that what he says is very much insulting, but colored with his vast resource of knowledge and peppered with a cool detachment that doesn't making the insults stark of blandly obvious.  You have been very consistant with it, which as an author, I understand how hard that can be at times, especially if you either put too much of yourself into the character, or play too much on the characters temper and/or play too much on the darker side of the character's emotional dynamics. 

Stick to it my dear, your brain is amazing and I wish to pet it <3

~ Azuka Ahara

well, at least he isn't being such a price about everything now.
I hope Shippo is ok!!!

Please update soon!!!!

Love your writing <3

I am so obsessed with this story!! I can't wait for the next update!!! You portray all characters to an impressive degree!! Please update soon!!

The chapter was cool and very interesting, but the end was the best. Sesshoumaru's comment was just priceless.

'Not bad, miko' I swear, Kagome should faint after that! Can't wait for more!

Don't listen to the other people! They are just playing off their emotions when they read the chapter. I think that Kagome is in character. It is very well written with lots of detail and Sesshoumaru is in character too. I also like how Kagome defeated all the Ogres with her power. And Sesshoumaru just says "Not bad". I really like this story and I'm glad that you updated. It really made my day. 

Can't wait for the next update.

Yay new chapter. I think the characters are still IC. :)

Love your fic can't wait to see what happens next. Glad he at least ackownledged her. >.< Poor Kagome. And now that his injures are open again does that mean a even longer wait time? O_o

This is the Kagome that I totally enjoy seeing! -Ugh Sesshomaru though.. I don't know why, but his compliment in the end just grinds my gears.

I loved the chapter! Kagome kicking butt! I love a strong Kagome so thank you! and take that sesshomaru! even he has to give her his reluctant approval :) can't wait for the next chapter!

That was really good and yes theyareall in character. Good job! Can't wait for the next update. Please soon.