I love this story. Write soon please!!!
Wonderful story, more please, I love your writing style!
Diane (Chapter 1) - Mon 16 Jan 2012
Well the story is good but you have lots of technical problems, proper names are always capitalized, I, I'm & I've are capitalized & when you add ing to words ending in e you take the e out, like making.
TKE (Chapter 1) - Mon 16 Jan 2012
awwww....so sweet!!! and poor inuyasha....lmao!
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