I really liked the first two chapters. I'm looking forward to how the story develops.

Hahaha oh this sounds like such a fun fiction.  Update soon please! :D

xoxo

Very interesting...

Great start! Can't wait for more! :)

LOVE IT!! Can't wait for the next one!!

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Good start.  Can't wait to see where it goes.

starting off to be a pretty interesting story. I'm pretty much hooked' really excited for the next chapter. Are the kids gonna get along,etc. Also I'm surprise you used Hakudoshi instead of the usual Kanna aspect, should prove most entertaining. :) Good luck!

Omg what a perfect idea for a story OOo oh my how juicy the drama is going to be.

Hmm i bet naraku is a very unattached father with shessy being more attentive 

that battle for kaome heart beings theh but we alll know who will win . Do update soon teheh

I love it, great chapter. Update soon