Full-blown incest you say.... Me curious! ^,^
so, i demand more from this, i'd like to see naraku finding out, sess kidna caring or even falling in love with her, maybe her even getting preggo, and who ever Sess is supporting, then kagome slitting naraku's throat and taking over as yakuza boss, Kagome-Kumacho! http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Yakuza !!!
:nods: Perfect plan for next chapter :nods: Perfect chapter, this one was too. I believe the logic of it is true too. :nods again: Thanks for writing!
Perfect ending to the story! It was refreshing and still HOT >D!
Can hardly wait for the next installment! :)
As for suggestions, I would love to the see two stranded/isolated somewhere together; whether it's on an island or stuck in a elevator, I think the situation would make for one hot, steamy lemon ;). Another one would be possibly in the army or training of some kind.
amy (Chapter 3) - Tue 17 Apr 2012
fANTASTIC, more, more.
Luna (Chapter 3) - Tue 17 Apr 2012
YOWZA!!!!!!!!!!!! Awesome smut, as always, my dear!!!
dianne (Chapter 3) - Tue 17 Apr 2012
Haha, sessh an unwilling prostitute! I so wanna see that! XD
Lol the chapter was great too, and I think a threesome sounds fun! ;)
Wow... interesting twist I thought it might turn into a threesome but you made it so that she's in love with Touga and uses Sesshoumaru as the outlet... Can't wait to see Sesshoumaru as the prostitute though its going to be so funny!
MOOOORE! part 2 part 2!!!
Continue.
Continue.
amy (Chapter 2) - Fri 27 Jan 2012
keep up the good work, I love it!
Luna (Chapter 2) - Thu 26 Jan 2012
-nosebleed!!-
Do you know how much I love your lemons? I do. Alot. If I could, I'd gather them all and make lemonade, then drink it every day.
... that just sounds wrong, doesnt?
lol But it's true! Awesome so far, I can't wait until part two comes!
| Please, plleeeaassseee continue this one. I'm all for Sess/Kag smuts and my face dropped at this chapter stopping at such a pivotal point. Lol, I can't wait for the next installment!
I am enjoying how you are exploring the facets of Sesshomaru's personality. First you play upon the chilly aspect of Sesshomaru's personality, then bring in his disapproval of his father's foibles, and his covetousness of what belongs to his father. Not really attractive character traits, but very real and very true to canon and the nature of a young male. Papa is powerful, but kind of worn smooth by experience, while Sesshy is more jagged. He's less controlled, and seems to feel more. Like Kagome, I can't help but be attracted by this younger Inu. I hope you write more soon!
I was drawn to this story by the catchy and well-written summary, and this first chapter lives up to that promise. Obsession is such a sexy concept! The best lemon scenes never neglect the most important sex organ, the brain. Your writing style is very descriptive, I could picture every detail, and your technical skills are excellent as well, I only noticed one little apostrophe out of place. I can't wait to find out what happens next...
You should definitely continue! xD
Oh my gosh! Heck yes! You need to continue this... I want to see what happens if Touga finds out! I love the role reversal that you have going on in this fic with the characters. Kagome as wanton instead of the usual horny for just Sesshoumaru. Please excuse my language. :)
Very hot ;) I like the older Kagome/young Sesshoumaru aspect. Great story!
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