You, my dear, have a way with words!

Do you pick songs and then write a story to compliment it, or do you find the song after you have an idea in your head, because the way the lyrics blend in seamlessly with the story is breathtaking. I normally do not enjoy song-fics, but both of your stories have caught me in their pull, hehe.

I also feel a second, concluding chapter to be unnecessary, though certainly you should write it if you need that released yourself, but for the reader, the speculation of what could happen next, and how they might make up, the talks they might have, and the understandings they might reach...it's a pleasant thing to think about.