Loved all of the wonderful updates!
That's an interesting cliffhanger you dropped at the end. Interesting as in super mega mean! lol
Sorry I didn't review each one, I kinda forgot, and I'm wiped out on entirely new levels from today. :S
School is killing me, hence the lack of update on my stories. T.T
Hope everything is going well with you and yours!
I look forward to more on this tale.
~Starfyre
Andrea (Chapter 45) - Tue 18 Jun 2013
I love this fanfic , i love it goes slowly, it makes me to want for more and more I can'r wait >_< plese next chapter
Fubuki (Chapter 42) - Tue 18 Jun 2013
I have enjoyed the story so far,If you want make the chapters longer. personally the longer the better,You have succeeded with brining a mature Kagome to life, there is no yelling or screaming obscenities, which is starting to ruin potentially good stories.
Your grammar and tensings are right, and I haven't found any typos or spelling mistakes.
Please keep up the good work
Fubuki
Cara (Chapter 42) - Tue 18 Jun 2013
So glad to see an update. Love this story! Thank you.
I like this story and would like to see longer chapters. Keep it coming and well done.
s_spina (Chapter 41) - Sat 01 Jun 2013
Ahhh love this :)
i has this reader itch for a story where Kagome is taking careof Inuyashaand you have made sucha lovelynew addition to my growing stack :D
CAN'twait for the updates :)
This story is fantastic! I love how different it is from so many other fanfics, it's fabulous! I look forward to the next update!
It's been three months and since you last updated, I'm glad your back. Great chapter, please update the next chapters soon and not in months. Keep it coming,
Please please please keep this story going, I LOVE it. I totally can see Kagome being alpha and being how you have wrote her. I can't wait to see what you do with the curse and how her pack will get on as part of Sess's pack!!
Oh wait! It just clicked into my head. Now I know why (from previous review) that it was slightly unnerving; that it went from the beginning to the end or her personality and characteristic instead of gradually to who she is now and how you perceive her. -sweat drop-
Ch.40 Apologies
-pretty funny.
Thank you for writing.
Hm... actually I had forgotten to state this in the beginning. I think you should have just stated in an AN that Kagome would be different and starting with that instead of her being "simpering" to instant "strong person". Eh, no pun intended on the words. Anyway, it just kind of made the hole beginning feel off balanced and not quite right. Though as you read inward to the other chapters and ignore it, her profiling makes sense, just that the beginning didn't and will continue not to. So it kind of makes you wondering continuously while trying to pay attention to the rest of the story. Does that make sense?
Maybe it’s just me. -shrugs- I can understand why you have Sesshoumaru comparing the two just as the readers or other characters might. Though it can not be accurate because it is your mind and not their own. Well… so far it is an interesting story. Rather humorous with Kagome and Sango getting mad at Miroku for doing that. Heck I would be to.
Congragulations!
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