It seems like it is an amazing story, but I can go further than here. It is riddled with tense jumping. The constant switching from had, did, was, could etc. to has, does, is, and can drives me up a wall. I just can't get past the constant corrections in my head. It's so well written beyond this, that it just angers me I can't make my mind get around it. I am sure it is a beautiful story, an amazing story. Everything I have read so far is captivating and like a vacuum, it sucks you in. It has a kind of fairy tale aspect to it as well. I dont know if it was intended, but I thought I should share It truly gives that Beauty and the Beast feeling, regardless of it's darker nature. It makes you feel as if there is hope for a happier ending. :/ I thank you for the wonderful writings I did read.
agh! I so wanted them to end up together :(
Well, it wasn't entirely happy, but i can't see a way for it to be that way without Kagome blocking out alot of crap. He'll just have to suffer a while and she'll need some counseling if they have it. Sad this is the end, wish there was an epilogue *hinthint* but if there isn't any i understand. I loved this story and will imagine an ending that would make me satisfied if there isn't one in the future.
This story was awesome, amazing and it had a wonderful ending! Happy New Year!
(Chapter 22) - Wed 16 Jan 2013
No...no epilogue? No "Sesshomaru mended broken bonds with the villages,starting with Kagome's. He once again became their defender, protector, and lord. He checked over his land often, but strayed to the village in which Kagome lived the most. While he understood that she needed space to heal, it was impossibly difficult to remain away from the woman who had not only freed him from the witches curse, but the prison of his own arrogant heart. Yet, he still respected her desires and needs, and never allowed her to see him when he came calling. And after a time, Kagome's heart and soul mended, the scars from that awfule night fading beneath the longing to see golden eyes filled with love and free from torment gaze upon her again...." Or something like that?
Pleaaaase? Cause hat woul be awesome! I've loved this story so much, and am delighted that I actually only found it towards the end.... waiting through a year of updates might have made me loopy lol XD
But in all seriousness, this was an excellent take on Beauty and the Beast, and I'm so grateful that you took the time to grace all us rabid fans with your wonderous story!
Awww...I wanted them to be together, but I still love the ending (: I actually really like that you made then ending different than how everyone expected XD
Keep it coming.
Ahrg!!! Cliffy!!! Must have more!
(Chapter 20) - Thu 10 Jan 2013
Poor Sessh! Knowing Kags she won't leave, she will go looking for him!
(Chapter 20) - Thu 10 Jan 2013
Love it!! <3 Can't wait for more and i'm just so into the story. I need to know what happens next. You always surprise me in this story. Can't wait for more updates!!! Good luck!!
Keep it coming, Happy New Year!
Keep it coming.
(Chapter 19) - Sun 30 Dec 2012
Oh my, what will become of Kagome?
(Chapter 19) - Sat 22 Dec 2012
Wow, that was gruesome! Poor Kagome.
I really liked how well written it was though. I think you captured both of their frustrations very well.
Can't wait to read more!
Umm... i noticed in one of your author notes, you called this bdsm...it's not. it's dark torture porn at the most. Bdsm is COSENSUAL understanding between a dominate and submissive. Kagome is not willing and is being violated against her wishes. You did specify that the story is dark and twisted, I understand that, but don't toss the label of BDSM onto it to make it more acceptable, because you missed the core of what makes those relationship work, its a mutual understanding between both partners and they have very loving and trusting relationship. this is not bdsm and please do not use that label so lightly. You make those relationship sound like something dark and perverse when it is not. what you write is your business and you have given multiple warnings, so no biggie there, just do not toss the bdsm label on rape and torture and that is what you wrote. Just wanted to point that out is all.
It's been a month since you last updated, I'm glad your back. Great chapter, keep it coming. Merry Christmas and a Happy New Year!
Sigh, Sesshomaru's gone back to being a sadist and Kagome is just a bit masochistic i think. I'd of asked by now what the hell was wrong with his face by now. Had he always been Beasts wicked twin or was he really the romance cover model every girl wants to find in her dreams (often). I still love your story, gonna keep up with it, and hope they get their stuff fixed soons.
(Chapter 1) - Sat 22 Dec 2012
Aww too bad about the rape, I will have to stop reading now. Good luck with the rest of the story, I have enjoyed it a lot till now.
Anyanka (Chapter 19) - Fri 21 Dec 2012
when I read a story like this, first i am dissapointed because i love the story and then i hate the characters. I would like once To read a story that when this happen and he turns into a sadistic and cruel bastard, who tortures and rapes kagome, to end bad. I mean, if it is a dark story keep it that way till the enD. Kagome should die or hate him for ever. I Hate when she accepts the torture and then forgives him and they live happily ever after. You can never love your rapist and torturer. I know. There is no punishment equal. So in all these storys he regret his actions at the end. Suffers from remorse and all is forgiven. Bullshit. He should die a painful death and die alone and hated
kagme123 (Chapter 18) - Fri 23 Nov 2012