ok gomen nasai about one of my reviews. i thouht it was the right story that i had read but it turned out to be a different one. you have like four stories in a row and the names got a big confusing lol.

all your stories are starting out pretty good and i'm looking forward to the next chapter. hmm this plot however is a really good one. i wonder what castle it is that she's the hime of? will they all be able to protect kagome when she transforms? if midoriko talked to kaede's grandmother then isn't kagome a lot older then she looks but then again time on the ther side of the well is different.

update soon onegai

ja ne

My suggestion is for you to find a beta reader to proofread your writing.

Found lots of errors and misspellings in the story.

Cheers!