Awww, nice ending to this chappter. Can't wait to see what happens next.
Keep it coming, please update soon.
first and for most i have to say that i have been reading this story since the beginning and as much as i wish i could have reviewed since chapter one i couldnt. for nobody can leave a review by mobile phones.
so yea....anyways love this story and i cant wait to find out what happenes next.
till next time<3
Well, now they have someone to blame. But it's not like they can undo what's been done. At least, the rest of the tachi can give Daisuke a tongue-lashing...if it ever comes to that. Looking forward to the next chapter.
poor kagome! i look forward to the next update! love the story! :)
Great chapter, please update soon.
I've enjoyed this chapter! :) Hm, I wonder what's going to happen next!! I can see this ending badly for a bit, but then getting better! Hmm I'm glad they both are influenced by the objects, yet not completely... it makes it interesting! :) Thanks for writing and I look forward to reading more! :D
I can't wait for the next chapter, please update soon.
oo aw poor dear, oo i wonder how and what thier specail little jewarly will have for them next
I'm enjoying your story! :) I can see how people may think that your story has been inconsistent, but I didn't truly mind it! I felt that they should still have their characteristics, though I do feel Sesshoumaru might have been more out of character than Kagome! (Yet, I understand your reasoning behind it!) They don't have much time together, since Inuyasha and the group are on their way! I look forward to reading more! :)
Sorry about the lack of smut, I was trying to add something kagome could draw off of later after the charm was removed.
Honestly, I hadn't even realized I was being inconsistant, But thank you for telling me! :D
I actually look forward to comments like that because it gives me a chance to improve my writing. but I promise there will be a lemon in the next chap. ;)
I like this story, but by chapter 5 i am a little confused if both sess and kagome are wearing ancient amulet, that makes them filled with desire and lust for each other, how is kagome able to resist sesshomaru's charms and then tells him she wants to be wooed/courted, it would have been more realistic and exciting if they would have just acted on their desire, you built it up only to let it go cold. I am not flaming your story just telling you what i thought when i read it, nice story though!
oh my goodness please write more I loved your story
That was a cute scene, please update soon.
Oh my goodness that was great cant wait to read more
Both chapters were great, please update soon. HAPPY NEW YEAR!
More please! More!!
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