I do like the start but what happen to Inuyasha's sword? Did she pick it up? Did she pick up the jew? Is the jew now whole? I do not believe she would just walk away and leave without the sword and Jew not to mention leaving the dead bodies of her friends, She would have bury them. You are doing a great job I look forward to the next chapter and hopefully you will explain more about what happen to the sword and the jew.